fic | Fish [viggo/orli, kate/orli-implied]

[godofwine]

I've got a perfectly perfect plan for New Zealand yet I had no real idea how to write this. So of course I wrote this.

Experimental style, non-linear timeframe, weird use of tenses. Not sure I'd understand the intended meaning myself. Also, loosely (very loosely) based on Elizabeth Bishop's poem "The Fish" if that's at all possible. (

Comments

[stephiepenguin]

oh, that's beautiful.

especially the last section. i love it all.

Re:

[stephiepenguin]

ps friended you

Re:

[godofwine]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. The last line was actually the first thing I wrote for this. Which says something about my writing style.

Friends you back!

[xiel]

awww. i love the concept--how Orli can simply trust Viggo... *sigh*

Re:

[godofwine]

It's funny how I never thought about that element when I was first planning this out, but it's ultimately the aspect that I wanted to emphasize.

Thank you muchly!

<3

[tragictrash]

that was quite lovely <3 you have a wonderful writing technique.

Re: <3

[godofwine]

Awww, thank you, thank you!! *hearts you as well*

(Am also in love with your icon)

[riverflame]

oo. That was mesmerizing. I love your style!

Re:

[godofwine]

Awww, thank you so much!

[frisbyg]

*incoherent*
*flail!*

<3

Re:

[godofwine]

*offers you a pint with a big grin*
*smuggles you!*

Thank you!! Welcome back, btw!

Re:

[frisbyg]

*chugs*

this is so good (the fic, I mean). Imma read again.

Re:

[godofwine]

But the pint's not bad either, aye? ;)

Awww, now I'm all blushing and incoherent. A thousand thank yous (with nekked Dom on top)!