fic | Twenty-Five [viggo/orli]

[godofwine]

Day of posting old fic, you can see by the date that it is indeed, very old. But I can't imagine going back to it, except for maybe an explanation of sorts.

Orlando's voice is wrong, I know. And I have quite a different take of what should happen, or rather, what would happen.

But.

Perfection is elusive, no?

Comments

[stephiepenguin]

So, it is disjointed, and and you do need a beta, but it is BEAUTIFUL.

and i don't mean to spam you with my gushing, and i should try to be more eloquent in my word selection, but it's late and i'm tired and hi.

If you can put up with my whimsy and my random real-life issues, I would love to beta for you.

(feel free to say no. you've never seen me before, you don't know how i write or more importantly how i beta, so i would totally understand. and yes, i know how to use capitals. :o) )

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[godofwine]

This was actually quite possibly the first lotrips I ever wrote, maybe even the first slash bit I wrote. And I think I wrote it in English class when I should have been listening to Lord Byron or Shelley or something. I think most of my writing is quite disjointed, though this more than others because I had always meant to write more of it, then changed my mind at the last minute. But thank you for your kind words.

I would gladly accept the offer of a beta! I try to read over my fic once or twice before I post, but there's always some obvious error I'm forgetting or weird tense that I'm messing up. And pronoun usage. Prepositional phrases. Um, yeah.

(Although, I do tend to write in fragmentary segments rather than full sentences. Weird writer quirk I suppose.)

I'm pretty sure I've seen your journal before, but I don't quite remember how I got there...

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[godofwine]

Oh, ps., I just re-read it and made about ten corrections. I really do need a beta.