Flash fiction: Open.

Jul 16, 2008 14:04

Inspired by the word prompt over at 15_minute_fic, though admittedly I spent more like twenty minutes on this. Mildly erotic and depressing. Muggle fiction, aka not fantasy.

What does it mean to open yourself up to someone, exactly? )

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justthismorning July 29 2008, 17:58:47 UTC
O. M. G.

This is fantastic. Brilliant. It's like you've torn sex down to it's barest elements and made us look at it in a way we always refuse to. I love it.

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goblin_marketer July 29 2008, 19:22:59 UTC
Why, thank you!

Flash fiction, especially prompted pieces, is so interesting to write, as I had no idea where this was going to go...I thought it might be a sexy little piece, and it ended up being revealing in ways I hadn't intended, but I'm pretty happy with it. I'm glad you enjoyed it too <3

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justthismorning July 31 2008, 02:57:59 UTC
flash fiction is perhaps the most interesting, because so much is crammed into so little. I look forward to reading your other stuff.

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goblin_marketer August 4 2008, 00:46:55 UTC
I had a professor once that always stressed the "economy of words," using as few as possible to say the purest thing, and I always kind of liked that. Though, oddly enough, my academic papers tend to be extremely long and rambly ;)

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