Happy Holidays, aviss!

[ourphilosophy]

Title: The Garden in Winter
Written for: aviss
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairing: Adam and Pepper (possible shades of Adam/Pepper)
Notes: It's so rare that I get the opportunity to write about these kids, and even rarer still when I get the chance to write about them all grown up (or, as the case may be, in the process of growing up). This, therefore,

Comments

[aviss]

Oh, it was lovely, quite sweet! I like the way you portrayer Adam and Pepper and him coming to term with resposibility but still being too young... and Dog, old but still energetic. Thanks so much, I like it a lot!

[ourphilosophy]

I think Dog will die quietly in his bed one day, having lived a full, happy, healthy canine life :) Thank you very much! Happy Holidays.

[sticktothestory]

This was lovely and vivid, Secret Author. I thought you portrayed the in-the-process-of-growing-up aspect very well.

[ourphilosophy]

University's such a bewildering time, isn't it? Thanks - I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[amaresu]

This was very nice. I liked Adam's reaction to Pepper's cheekbones.

[ourphilosophy]

Thank you! I have the feeling that girl's dead beautiful and doesn't even realize it.

[waxbean]

delicious!

There's so much to enjoy about this sweet little tale -- what I like most about it, though, is how you've captured this moment -- the rich details of setting... I feel like I'm right there. I love it when something I read pulls me into it so deeply.

[irisbleufic]

Many thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it <3

[unaccredited]

Oh, I really liked this. There's a lovely feeling to it, and you captured Adam and Pepper (and even Dog) spot on.

[irisbleufic]

Thank you very much :) It's a bit of an inset for Crown of Stars universe, even, if anyone fancies reading it in another light.