Happy Holidays, Sanomi!

Dec 16, 2006 14:00

Title: Apologies, Famine and the Hazards of Christmas Shopping
Gift for: sanomi
gift from: dreya_uberwald
Words: 8800
Rating: R
Characters: The Them, the Horsepersons and Pestilence.
Pairings: Brian/Wensleydale, Famine/Pollution and hints of Adam/Pepper.
Summary: Brian wants to do something special for Wensleydale, but isn’t sure quite what. Can a certain ( Read more... )

the horsepersons, pollution, famine, wensleydale, brian, famine/pollution, adam/pepper, rating:r, slash, brian/wensley, the them, adam, 2006 exchange, pepper

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candidlily December 17 2006, 05:35:24 UTC
I loved this SO MUCH! I love it when Pestilence shows up for a bit of insight. :P And the focus on the less popular characters was very lovely. The character development you had here was very well done. I expect Wensleydale would grow up to be that sort of overachiever. Well done, secret author!

P.S. Yay for teenage drama almost causing the apocalypse. ;)

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vulgarweed December 17 2006, 05:36:18 UTC
Oh, what a fantastic story this is! Brian consulting with Wensleydale's Other Number for gift advice is just an inspired idea, and all the interactions between the characters are so right-on and delightful.

That's a damn nice present. Oh yes, yes it is. Can't think of anything better! So big holiday warm fuzzies with this one!

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andremeese December 17 2006, 06:10:23 UTC
SO much love for this, Secret Author! I'm not usually a big fan of the Them or Horsepeople, but this was really quite nice!

LoveloveLOVE the Ebola reference. Hee.

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shadowvalkyrie December 17 2006, 09:39:22 UTC
This was just /too/ perfect. I can't comment on all the little details I liked, because they are just too many. The irony of the whole situation really got me. I loved Pestilence's showing up and all the cynical little delights that make a horseperson's life. Also, your characterisations were lovely. The ending finally was very cute, without breaking the general tone.

My favourite sentence was, "Hence the reason why he was currently in the process of thoroughly debasing himself - and perhaps more worryingly risking the wrath of Pepper - by frequenting a fast food joint owned by a multinational conglomerate, which had last year appeared at number three on the Planet’s Most Unethical list." Sums it all up and works out of context as well. Simply *lol*!

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bastloki December 17 2006, 10:57:49 UTC
*Grins* Fantastic. Lovely bit of work. Good job, that...person. Eh, I'm hopeless at telling on the 'net. Female, though, I'm presuming.

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runic_binary December 17 2006, 12:04:36 UTC
I love this. The characterizations, the tone, the language, the teenage angst-induced second near-Apocalypse...and there were so many lines that made me laugh out loud. Absolutely wonderful.

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