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Happy Holidays, Cutebunny/Sporkfosterfan!

Dec 17, 2016 19:43

Title: Out of Ambit

Author: Surprise!

Rating: PG

Disclaimer: All characters and setting belong to Terry Pratchett and Neil Gaiman. They are being borrowed and will be returned whole and recognizable.

Word count: 5665

Author's note: Happy holidays, cutebunny/sporkfosterfan! Beta thanks to pasiphile.

Summary: Aziraphale and Crowley got a bit lost on their ( Read more... )

rating:pg, fic, 2016 exchange, crossover:discworld

Comments 8

anonymous December 18 2016, 04:08:40 UTC

Hello. Sporkfosterfan here.

Thank you for this amazing story. I loved reading about Aziraphale and Crowley traveling through Ankh Morpork and being confused by all the new people and surroundings. Captain Angua and Sergeant Littlebottom were awesome, and Detritus's dialogue was spot on. I'm not as familiar with the wizards of Discworld, but I thought they were well done.

One snippet that I enjoyed was Aziraphale and Crowley smelling the river Ankh and being disgusted by the stench. Poor them. But hey, at least they didn't eat a CMOT Dibbler's sausage inna bun (I can only imagine how that would go down).

secret_kracken December 18 2016, 08:12:48 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it even though the wizards butted in. :) Angua and Cheri and Detritus are my favorite officers.
And ohhh the Ankh. Aziraphale and Crowley really didn't know what they were getting into.

majinie December 18 2016, 12:56:19 UTC

This was completely amazing. The characters were so spot-on and you made me laugh a lot, especially with the bit about the Ankh. Aziraphale in the library of the Unseen University... I can't believe I never thought of that before, that idea needs some more consideration :D
Wonderfully done. (Oh, and the "Redo from Start" at the end was perfectly placed. I might actually do that now. ^.^)
~Majinie

secret_kracken December 18 2016, 21:14:31 UTC

I was very excited to get to write the Library! Thanks for the kind words.

lunasong365 December 18 2016, 17:44:12 UTC

Aziraphale calming the book in the library was a nice touch.

secret_kracken December 18 2016, 21:11:01 UTC

Thank you!

cursiella December 27 2016, 05:30:49 UTC

Good Omens bring me here... now... how am I supoused to leave without Discworld, thak you a lot for the intro and for the story :D

irisbleufic January 9 2017, 04:48:25 UTC

“Which god?”

“Beg pardon?”

“Angel, you said. Which god?”

“Er. Adonai? YHWH?”

The officer’s ears twitched at the angelic pronunciation, but she shrugged. “Doesn't ring a bell. What kind of specialties?”

“...All of them?” Aziraphale managed, rattled.

This is HILARIOUS. Beautifully done, secret author! Happy New Year <3