Random White Collar H/C Snippet.

[gnome781]

Lol, After reading all the responses to the debate started by crying_brown about hurt comfort stories I had the urge to write this. It’s not much but I did try to keep everyone in character, please let me know how I did

Comments

[yacoba]

I think you did a great job keeping both Neal and Peter in character, especially impressive that this is your first time writing for White Collar [I haven't been following the debate but I have for other fandoms written H/C but for White Collar I can't think how to do it and keep both characters true] Well done!

[gnome781]

Thank you so much! I'm so pleased you think I did well, it was a lot of fun trying this. :)

[jrosemary]

Gorgeous and gut-wrenching--excellent job.

The comfort, followed by restraint, was perfectly in character--although in my mind, there isn't much h/c that's not in character for these two, restrained or not!

[gnome781]

Wow, Thank you!

Lol, I'm a sucker for H/C in all it's many forms as well! :)

[damietta]

This is how to me Neal would handle things. Not some hysterical or outward display, but (almost) alone. He wouldn't wallow for long and learn to live with the hole in his heart.

[gnome781]

I'm glad you agree! This was a very enjoyable piece to write, and it's always great to hear when you get what you meant across. :D

[misura]

The shift in tenses threw me ever so slightly, but I'm definitely with damietta in thinking this would be the way Neal would handle grief, especially at this point in his life. Loved Peter having caught the tiny hints Neal must have dropped unknowingly during the day and being there for him.

[gnome781]

Lol, tense is my worst subject and the reason I really need a beta, but thank you for sticking with it and giving me fb! :)

Also I'm reading your chuck crossover (I'm on chapter 7) in another Tab right this minute and I am in love, Love, LOVE with it!! :D

[china_shop]

Oh, I really like this! *smishes Neal*

[gnome781]

Thank you!!