Comments | gmth: TM!Lucius ficlet

gmth

TM!Lucius ficlet

Aug 29, 2005 02:24

A combined response for two of the challenges issued last month: "The first time I saw..." and "What is the one thing about yourself you don't want anyone else to know?" About 2,200 words.

( The first time I saw my wife after my arrest, she brought me some dreadful news. Contains spoilers for HBP. No smut, implied Snape/Lucius. )

gen, my hp fic, theatrical muse, fic, son

Comments 38

absynthia August 29 2005, 06:49:08 UTC

Have you considered turning this into a long, chaptered fic?

Would you?

If I begged prettily?

gmth August 29 2005, 13:43:36 UTC

Hee! Well I'm glad you thought it was good enough to be continued, at least. That's very flattering, so thank you for that. :-) I have no idea where I'd take it next, though.

bethbethbeth August 29 2005, 07:00:18 UTC

"My God, Narcissa, what have you done?"

If I didn't know better, I'd think that Narcissa knew *exactly* what she was doing when she asked Severus to take that vow.

Hmmm.

(very cool, G.)

gmth August 29 2005, 13:42:35 UTC

Oooh, that's actually a pretty interesting take on this, and one I hadn't considered. I do love that idea, though. Yes, yes, yes. Thanks! :-)

fleshdress August 29 2005, 07:13:30 UTC

That was absolutely awesome. You caught the atmosphere of the prison really nicely, and I actually felt for Lucius. Excellent stuff.

gmth August 29 2005, 13:41:56 UTC

Thank you so much! *bounce* I'm so thrilled you thought so. :-)

iulia_linnea August 29 2005, 07:14:11 UTC

Oh. Oh, I feel sorry for the bastard. I do. And the strength of your characterization in so few words? Priceless.

gmth August 29 2005, 13:41:22 UTC

Thank you! I love it when people say they sympathize with my poor, sweet, misunderstood boy. ;-)

manic1066 August 29 2005, 07:32:31 UTC

Loved it! Jail fic = crack

gmth August 29 2005, 13:40:43 UTC

Thanks. :-) I've written a few of these Lucius-in-jail fics, and they're so much fun.