Retaliation Part 2

[glyn_zaelin]

Comments

[junbait]

LOVE IT! That was really hot! I like your writing style so I'm really glad that this isn't finished yet.

[glyn_zaelin]

Thank you! Glad you like my style. Hopefully the next part won't take a year to get out:D

[iqachipmunk]

kyaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!! I demand a sequel to this..please...

[glyn_zaelin]

But-but this is the sequel! lol. Something is in the works though it's still in my brain.

[iqachipmunk]

then..I demand a sequel for this sequel...hehehehe (^_~)

[biraincute]

Now I want to know how will Mao take her revenge :)) Thank you for this! And this was definitely HOT >:D

[glyn_zaelin]

I want to know how she'll do it too... still thinking on that. I'm open to suggestions though...

[magzfan]

Love to see you again Glyn. Love this sequel. Wahh, that was hot *fans herself*. More more please.

[glyn_zaelin]

Heya, Magz. Yeah, been rather AWOL the past few months. Just getting back into the fandom. Just to warn you though, things might just get a little hotter.

[dreamininjapan]

wow! I have no idea how express how talented I think you are. I mean yes I enjoyed the smut, but besides that, your writing is just great. The way you set up the characters and your descriptions. It really puts me right in the story. I loved the way the these characters were written! And of coursed I enjoyed the smut; it was lovely, and I am dying for the next part in this story!

[glyn_zaelin]

Thank for the lovely comments. I' m happy how the characters are developing. And I'm really hoping it won't take a year to get the next one out.