Comments | glory_jean: Drabble: His Smile

glory_jean

Drabble: His Smile

Mar 25, 2009 09:57

Title: His Smile
Author: glory-jean
Pairing/Characters: Ten, Rose, Martha, Donna, Jack
Rating: All Ages
Summary: The Doctor's smile is many things.
Disclaimer: Based on characters owned and created by BBC, used without permission.
Author's Notes: drabble. Unbeta'd 'cause the angst bunny done bit me.

( His smile is... )

donna, jack, tenth doctor, rose, fanfic, doctor who, martha, drabble

Comments 6

np_complete March 26 2009, 01:39:38 UTC

I like it! "It could light the darkness but it never once reaches eyes". I like the progression of different people seeing it, and the suggestion that it's changing over time.

glory_jean March 27 2009, 07:39:36 UTC

Thank you!

Trying to convey the different ways the Doctor related to his companions at different points in his life in 100 words was certainly a bit challenging!

cytherea999 March 26 2009, 02:34:19 UTC

thats very sweet and quite sad in it's own way.

glory_jean March 27 2009, 07:40:03 UTC

Thank you. :D

Thanks for reading.

ditte3 June 10 2010, 07:05:13 UTC

Beautifully and well written.Especially like the line "It could light the darkness but it never once reaches eyes."Martha saw it,but we know that when he was with rose his smile shone like the sun.

glory_jean June 21 2010, 23:36:31 UTC

Thanks! :)

Yeah, that's how I always see S3 Ten: he smiles a lot but he never stops looking sad.