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glorious_spoon

When You're a Stranger 4/4

Jan 24, 2010 00:26

When You're a Stranger (Part 4)

( It's kind of a long story... )

fic: spn, castiel, outside pov, barnes, sam winchester, bobby singer, damien, dean winchester

Comments 36

cassyl January 24 2010, 16:29:23 UTC

I'm really enjoying this, and I'm looking forward to seeing how you wrap it up.

glorious_spoon January 25 2010, 20:25:12 UTC

Thank you! I hope it doesn't disappoint.

gladdecease January 24 2010, 18:00:27 UTC

Oh, this was fun to read. The language was beautiful - a layperson applying what they understand to the supernatural leads to really interesting analogies. The scene leading up to the bowl of light felt appropriately fast-paced, and the scene immediately after appropriately worried.

I agree with above posters that your Dean!voice is fantastic - I can easily hear him saying everything you've written in his dialogue. I also really like how Damien perceives Castiel as so very otherworldly. The prose you used matched up with so many of Castiel's quirks and characteristics that I could clearly picture what he was doing the entire time.

glorious_spoon January 25 2010, 20:27:20 UTC

It was a lot of fun to look at Dean and Sam's world through the lens of someone who really didn't understand the bulk of what was going on, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review!

villainxatxhert January 24 2010, 18:27:00 UTC

I'm liking this! My favorite part was actually when Dean grabbed Cas' leg before whining about beer. Can't wait to see how the whole thing will end.

glorious_spoon January 25 2010, 20:27:47 UTC

Dean needs his beer! Thanks for the review :)

star_watcher81 January 24 2010, 21:42:45 UTC

I just stumbled onto this story and I LOVE IT SO MUCH. I have a particular fondness for outsider-POV stories, and this one is perfect; I really like Damien's narrative voice. This is well-written and the characterization is spot-on. I'm glad to see that there will be more, because I want to see Damien and Barnes actually react to the fact that angels exist! Thank you for sharing!

glorious_spoon January 25 2010, 20:28:50 UTC

There aren't nearly enough outside pov stories, in my opinion. This went pretty far astray from what I originally had in mind when I started this story, but I'm pretty content with how it came out, and I'm so glad people are enjoying it. Thanks for the review!

elusive_life_77 January 25 2010, 18:01:50 UTC

Heehee! This is such a fun 'Verse to read!!!!

glorious_spoon January 25 2010, 20:29:02 UTC

Thank you!