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glorious_spoon

Down in Flames

Sep 12, 2010 12:39

Title: Down in Flames
Pairing: Eliot/Hardison pre-slash
Rating: PG
Warnings: none
Summary: There are things Eliot knows how to deal with, and things he doesn't. Coda to 'The Gone Fishing Job'.

( He can smell dirt, gun-oil, body odor. )

eliot spencer, alec hardison, fic: leverage

Comments 31

dragondie September 13 2010, 04:52:01 UTC

Love the rhythm of the dialogue,and your characterization is great. :)

glorious_spoon September 14 2010, 20:03:44 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad to hear it all worked for you.

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glorious_spoon September 14 2010, 20:03:55 UTC

Glad you enjoyed!

yoruichiyoshi12 September 13 2010, 12:33:59 UTC

You write them both so well! <3

glorious_spoon September 14 2010, 20:04:13 UTC

\o/ Thank you!

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glorious_spoon November 3 2010, 02:06:22 UTC

I'm glad you liked! :)

spankulert February 23 2011, 21:22:44 UTC

The dialogue sounds like it came right off the show, and you've done an excellent job on Eliot's POV. Excellent read <3

glorious_spoon February 27 2011, 15:09:26 UTC

Thank you so much! Eliot and Hardison's banter is never not fun, so I'm really glad to hear that I pulled it off :)