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saberivojo July 21 2010, 23:56:54 UTC
What a great beginning. I love that when John shows up, Jay can see the difference, how the weight is off Dean.

Can't wait for more.

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glorious_spoon July 22 2010, 12:45:44 UTC
Thank you!

I think Dean has always been able to be a little more of a kid when John was around.

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kalliel July 23 2010, 08:03:18 UTC
This is such a lovely start; I'm definitely hooked--loving every minute. I love the way you've chosen to characterize Jay, and the way we get to see both Winchester impressions of him, and his impressions of them.

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glorious_spoon July 23 2010, 12:36:48 UTC
Thank you so much! I hope the rest of the story lives up to it.

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heard_the_owl September 26 2010, 15:22:51 UTC
I'm really enjoying this. Your characterizations of the boys are just wonderful and I'm real interested in learning more about the mysterious Jay. Off to read more! Thanks!

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glorious_spoon September 26 2010, 15:30:25 UTC
*grin* Thank you so much! I hope you like the rest of it.

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aldea16 September 27 2010, 07:27:40 UTC
It's really hard to set up a likable, belivable OC, but I like Jay so far. Kudos!

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sabora November 30 2010, 01:53:10 UTC
This was a very memorable read. The characters were realistic and the setting was perfect. :)

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glorious_spoon November 30 2010, 02:03:52 UTC
Thank you XD

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