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fsquare December 14 2007, 08:31:06 UTC
he almost makes it into the bathroom before strong arms are pulling him close to a warm chest, fingers threading in wisps of hair and tugging too tightly. he's so clumsy, so arrogant, so stupid and he's not heechul's type-

but maybe heechul is thinking too hard- either that or the sounds kang in makes in his sleep sound painfully similar to his own name.

my heart just clench a little at those parts..my fave parts... along with the whole story itself.

I love the chemistry between Heechul & Kangin here. Love it.

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glonk December 15 2007, 00:07:02 UTC
the funny thing is, i had a lot of problems trying to word the first sentences you quoted. i'm glad it didn't look too awkward. thank you so much for your comment!

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fsquare December 16 2007, 09:11:39 UTC
oh no..no awkward at all. :D .. ^_~ you're welcome. I'll waiting for more *hint* *hint* .. jk..haha.. just ignore me..XD

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rawthorne December 14 2007, 10:34:48 UTC
I hadn't considered the pairing before reading this. But I like it. I liked it a lot.

Great job on Heechul's POV!

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glonk December 15 2007, 00:08:29 UTC
i was really worried about writing heechul correctly, so thank you for saying something about that. thanks for reading as well!

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glonk December 15 2007, 00:09:13 UTC
they're really too obvious, aren't they? i felt that in the suju movie as well...

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dbdbyeah December 14 2007, 16:10:25 UTC


OMG. KANGCHUL. O.O i was just talking to a friend of mine about them a while ago.... and then this??? *dies*

that last line just tugged at all my heartstrings. well done! ^^,

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glonk December 15 2007, 00:09:51 UTC
i can read minds? ~_~

thank you!

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halcyon_morn December 14 2007, 17:16:35 UTC
A take on Kangchul I don't see very often, and a very well done one, at that. Bravo/a.

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glonk December 15 2007, 00:11:23 UTC
thank you for that! i was kind of worried about the response i would get with this for some reason...

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