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Fast Fiction 2008 - Oops I Broke The World

Apr 20, 2008 17:55

Title: Oops I Broke The World
Word: fish
Word count: 250
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Comments 9

kia_faerie April 20 2008, 19:00:11 UTC

me likey :D

glittermouse April 20 2008, 20:17:40 UTC

Thank you! This was the easiest of yours to write, and it may also be the most fun. :)

kia_faerie April 20 2008, 21:27:05 UTC

Yes it was a fun one :)
I'm sure you won't have fun with them all..they were a bit random!

knightbird April 20 2008, 19:43:05 UTC

Lol
Love it!

glittermouse April 20 2008, 20:18:06 UTC

The bit about Athena is my most LOLable part. ;)

jaxomsride April 20 2008, 20:42:56 UTC

LOL!
At least they weren't playing "Happy Families"!

glittermouse April 21 2008, 00:00:31 UTC

It started as pontoon, to be honest, but then I realised I know bugger all about card games and went for the easy one. ;)

notdan April 20 2008, 22:55:23 UTC

I really enjoyed this. I like the way it slowly dawns on the reader who's playing cards - it immediately makes you speculate about what the stakes might be.

glittermouse April 21 2008, 00:01:05 UTC

Thank you! So who's the blond youth then Mr Clever? ;)

I started out with stakes, but didnt have enough words :(