Fic: The Pick-Up [TVXQ RPS | AU]

[glitterburn]

Title: The Pick-Up
Fandom: TVXQ
Pairing: Yunho/Changmin
Rating: NC17
Summary: This morning, supermodel Changmin’s biggest problem was running out of cigarettes. His day is about to get worse as a case of mistaken identity sends him into the line of fire-and into the arms of cop/spy/government agent/he’s-a-bit-vague-about-it-really Yunho, who would

Comments

[dentedsky]

Ah sweet tsundere Changmin, bitchface on the outside and romant... horny bastard on the inside. Changmin was such a sucker for Yunho's handsome face from the get-go, and there's Yunho erecting walls to keep Changmin away only for Changmin to erode them with as many well-thought lines as he can gather from this mental box of flirt ammo.

Sexy as hell, with a slash of dark brows and an insistent, soul-stripping gaze, and that full, curving lower lip...

And isn't that Yunho summed up right there? Om nom nom nommies.

Need I mention the sex arrrghhh lucky Changmin is getting some thorough violation tonight.

[glitterburn]

Thank you :D Bitchface!Changmin is such a thing of beauty. And! finally I looked up what 'tsundere' means LMAO I learned something today...

[dentedsky]

LOL I had hikari explain it to me, she did a really good explanation as to why Changmin is a tsundere. Important Things To Know When Shipping HoMin #964

[glitterburn]

ahaha that gif! It's such a BL trope isn't it, and now I know what it means, I recognise it from about errrrr 90% of the yaoi I've read.

[almond86]

This is exactly why i like to read your fics right before i sleep..you raise the standard so high it is always hard to read smthg as satisfying after reading your fics..absolutely love horny Changmin here...I'd probably feel..wait did i say probably??! Heck i feel the same way just looking at pics of Yunho let alone see him in person! I'd probably spontaneously combust from the rush of blood through my system!

Your stories are always well rounded and i especially enjoy the subtle hints that build up the characaters and develop the plot quietly and seamlessly...now i can go to bed and have sweet dreams of a certain supermodel and his sexy agent ;-)

[glitterburn]

Thank you! LOL if I saw Yunho in person I would probably stand frozen unable to even think HAHAHA XD well, I hope you had very sweet dreams about supermodel Changmin and sexy Agent Jung ;) :p

[taekey_tokitha]

I L O V E D IT SO SO MUCH , THE MOMENT I TAKE THE COMPUTER I'LL SAVE IT IN MY MEMORIES AND SHARE IT WITH THE WORLD FOR THEM TO LOVE IT AS MUCH AS I DID, I SRSLY LOVE YOUR FANFICS.

[glitterburn]

Thank you so much!!

[lolistar73]

-jumps up and down- HoMin! HoMin! Look everyone, it's finally ukeMaxTime!!!!!!!!! xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD -explodes-

Okay first of all -tearfully kneels on the floor and grabs your hand- marry me, for I shall never know a world of happiness if I am without your bottomMin smut. :'D

-cough- With my ukeMin -spazzes- rant out of the way I can give you a proper review.

A summary like that is just not fair. It just isn't. Changmin being forced to strip and gunpoint - I clicked this link so fast my finger got tired even though after the first click all other actions were completely unnecessary. />.Anyways, every time I click on your fics, the notion of 'this is my favorite fic thus far' comes and attacks me. Truth is, I just can't choose a favorite fic from you - *rarely* have I come across an author where I think every single one of her/his fics are good. And needless to say you are obviously one -nods

[glitterburn]

Oh wow, thank you for such an amazing comment :D you totally made my day! I have to admit that while Yunho is my absolute bias, I *love* using Changmin as the POV character because he's such an interesting personality. And usually when I write someone as the POV character I get ridiculously attached to them and end up falling for them, too. So Changmin is like my second bias now and er the rest of my bias list is trailing in the dust several miles back. Hrmm.

Yes, I really wanted to look at 'serious' Yunho this time. Usually I write him as a dorky beam of sunshine but he can be so sombre and aware of his responsibilities (less so these days, but still), and I like it when he plays the tough guy even if it's only superficially, so I'm glad that aspect of the fic worked for you ^^

Ah and also my next two fics will be ukeMin! I just saw something yummy on the kink meme that I want to write and there's another that I really have to finish OTL XD

[trish3815]

You had me laughing because I know Changmin can be snarky but this was more like a diva but then he was a supermodel... he already had the hots for Yunho.. the sex scene was to die for.. love the ending dangling the handcuffs.. thanks for sharing..

[glitterburn]

Thank you! Naomi Campbell wouldn't get out of bed for less than $10,000; supermodel!Changmin would only get out of bed if secret agent!Yunho was on the other side of the room XD

[trish3815]

And NAKED!!

[glitterburn]

Naked and with handcuffs! Go Changmin go, what are you waiting for!