Title: Open/Closed
Fandom: Super Junior M RPS
Pairing: Siwon/Zhou Mi
Rating: NC17
Summary: Five times Zhou Mi forgot to lock the bathroom door.
Notes: Inspired by a line in
lixia84’s fic
Refract, so this is for her, for providing me with such pretty, pretty mental images XD Fulfils the ‘consent play’ square for kink_bingo.
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I just... I LOVE YOUR FILTHY MIND SO MUCH!!!!!!!!
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I just - OK. The power dynamics in this are just wonderfully sketched out. I can't decide most of the time just how little or how much Siwon is in control of the situation and just how much of it is down to Mimi being such a bloody exhibitionist (BTW I love that you added that narcissistic little bit of his character to the fic - they all are, obviously, but Mimi's preoccupation with his appearance borders on the obsessive and the line where you describe how he conjures up an imaginary audience just hits all the right notes because he so would think of people watching him in the bath). The fact that HG tries to intervene in their little power struggle just adds that extra little layer of complexity as well, and of course raises all these implications about what happens when he leaves ( ... )
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EEEEEE honestly I what I love so much about this is the fact that Siwon's motives are so mysterious. Like the fight he has with HG and how he's able to shrug it off so quickly afterwards while HG is just sulking in his room. Gah! So many possibilities, and so much angst just lurking beneath the surface.
It's sort of like Games in the power play, but not as dark, or yeah as screwed up! It's BURNING HOT though XD
*adds Intimate Note to the 'must watch' list, which is just getting longer by the minute*
Reading this was a great way to start the day, so that more than made up for it!!
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Sungmin's giggle is so unbelievably adorable, it's really not fair that he can go from being a bundle of cute pink fluff to this really fierce slutty babe in the blink of an eye.
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Hope to read more of your fics soon =D
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I know it's probably telling that Kyu and SungMin are still my favourite bit of this, but the whole HG dynamic comes through stronger as well on this second read.
But most of all, it's your Mimi who switches between fluttery, soft uncertainty and steely certainty with such pace that it makes it hugely emotional, and yet exciting too.
It's like the consent part of the consent play bingo square can be taken entirely in his own head. What does he give himself permission to do? Good job Siwon is so Siwon I mean willing!
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Mimi is an emotional rollercoaster all by himself. Siwon just wants to ride it.
It's like the consent part of the consent play bingo square can be taken entirely in his own head.
Yes! There's a few ways the 'consent play' aspect could be read, but that particular one is the strongest IMO.
Thank you xxx
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