Fic: Open/Closed [SJM RPS]

[glitterburn]

Title: Open/Closed
Fandom: Super Junior M RPS
Pairing: Siwon/Zhou Mi
Rating: NC17
Summary: Five times Zhou Mi forgot to lock the bathroom door.
Notes: Inspired by a line in lixia84’s fic Refract, so this is for her, for providing me with such pretty, pretty mental images XD Fulfils the ‘consent play’ square for kink_bingo.

Open/ClosedThe first time, it

Comments

CANNOT BREATHE

[dislex1a]

ARRRRGH. I just woke up to this bit of smutty goodness and I am so incoherent with squee so this will have to be a placeholder comment until I get my act together.

I just... I LOVE YOUR FILTHY MIND SO MUCH!!!!!!!!

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Ughhh just realised I put the link to your LJ and not direct to the fic, I fixed it now *headdesk* *blames HG's stupid tiger dance*

*EIGHT HOURS LATER, STILL DEAD FROM SHOWER PORN*

[dislex1a]

I've re-read this about 5 times now! LOL And my overwhelming reaction is still incoherency punctuated with lots and lots of flailing.

I just - OK. The power dynamics in this are just wonderfully sketched out. I can't decide most of the time just how little or how much Siwon is in control of the situation and just how much of it is down to Mimi being such a bloody exhibitionist (BTW I love that you added that narcissistic little bit of his character to the fic - they all are, obviously, but Mimi's preoccupation with his appearance borders on the obsessive and the line where you describe how he conjures up an imaginary audience just hits all the right notes because he so would think of people watching him in the bath). The fact that HG tries to intervene in their little power struggle just adds that extra little layer of complexity as well, and of course raises all these implications about what happens when he leaves

*sends Fishy to resurrect you with his hip-thrustin' antics*

[glitterburn]

No, thank YOU for giving me such a delicious bunny in the first place! XDDDD You have no idea how many times I've re-read Refract (actually I lost count o_O) and still that line makes me go 'guh' so I'm glad you enjoyed this :D :p Also, my first 'five times' fic! LOL how momentous

YAY FILTHY FISHY

[dislex1a]

Just... Mimi gives an inch and Siwon takes a mile. IDK, I'll see how it develops.

EEEEEE honestly I what I love so much about this is the fact that Siwon's motives are so mysterious. Like the fight he has with HG and how he's able to shrug it off so quickly afterwards while HG is just sulking in his room. Gah! So many possibilities, and so much angst just lurking beneath the surface.

It's sort of like Games in the power play, but not as dark, or yeah as screwed up! It's BURNING HOT though XD

*adds Intimate Note to the 'must watch' list, which is just getting longer by the minute*

Reading this was a great way to start the day, so that more than made up for it!!

*was about to make comment about filthy Fishy swimming in a channel but OMG that's too perverted*

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HG is just jealous because Siwon now prefers to perv on Mimi in the shower after all those times he let HG perv on him and vice versa (at 4mins). Siwon, you're too cruel! Just because Mimi has longer legs!

Sungmin's giggle is so unbelievably adorable, it's really not fair that he can go from being a bundle of cute pink fluff to this really fierce slutty babe in the blink of an eye.

[kyttenfae]

Oh dear GOD that was just beyond delicious. I'm still reeling. Exhibitionist!Mimi/Voyeur!Siwon with bonus power struggles may be my new fave thing ever. There were just /so/ many parts of this that were gorgeous. The through-the-glass kiss may be the best not-kiss I've read in Kpop. And all the possessive!Hannie was nommy (and all the cameos from the other members <3333).

[glitterburn]

Thank you for the lovely comment :D The not-kiss was such a strong image in my head so I'm glad it worked for you!

[racquelle2005]

anfojlewadfpa,fdal loved it. Oh I just loved it. The way you described it was so thorough and detailed. Good job<333

Hope to read more of your fics soon =D

[glitterburn]

Thank you! SuJu are eating my brain right now so I will be writing more fic ^^

[diagon]

Just finished reading through it again (busy work morning, sorry) and it is really deliciously detailed.

I know it's probably telling that Kyu and SungMin are still my favourite bit of this, but the whole HG dynamic comes through stronger as well on this second read.

But most of all, it's your Mimi who switches between fluttery, soft uncertainty and steely certainty with such pace that it makes it hugely emotional, and yet exciting too.

It's like the consent part of the consent play bingo square can be taken entirely in his own head. What does he give himself permission to do? Good job Siwon is so Siwon I mean willing!

[glitterburn]

You know I always wonder if I can be funny in fic and it did work this time because you laughed at Kyu and Min XD

Mimi is an emotional rollercoaster all by himself. Siwon just wants to ride it.

It's like the consent part of the consent play bingo square can be taken entirely in his own head.

Yes! There's a few ways the 'consent play' aspect could be read, but that particular one is the strongest IMO.

Thank you xxx