Comments | glisteninggold: Part X: When there’s nowhere else for Ron (24 December, 2002)

glisteninggold

Part X: When there’s nowhere else for Ron (24 December, 2002)

Oct 28, 2006 20:11

Title: Tart Noir Around and About Vertick Alley
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Tart Noir, crime-romance
Pairings: Lavender/Zacharias, Draco/Ron, Susan/Blaise, Zacharias/Ginny ...
Summary: Lavender Brown is part of the investigation into the murders of the children of Death Eaters and is madly in love with her flatmate and best friend, Zacharias Smith. Ron ( Read more... )

pg-13, the flat

Comments 14

couperose October 28 2006, 08:43:49 UTC

Oh dear. Oh deary deary dear.
So very sad I felt like crying.
Poor Harry and poor Parvati and poor Lavlav.

On the plus side, the D/R was beautiful.

glisteninggold November 2 2006, 08:11:40 UTC

Beautiful wouldn't exactly be the word I'd use. But sure :)

Look at me, posting again so soon!

dedra October 28 2006, 11:51:22 UTC

OMG! Ron and Draco!

I find myself praying that Parvati wakes up soon, if only for Harry's sake, and to find the attacker quickly.

Excellent update!

glisteninggold November 2 2006, 08:12:28 UTC

I want to wake Parvati up, damnit, because I hate Harry and his gaunt-with-misery look.

Next part!

squigglepop18 October 28 2006, 13:05:49 UTC

I like the D/R; very them if you get me. And, although I'd have loved it if they did, the fact they didn't 'go all the way' makes it more realistic, more in character to a sense.

I do think Draco and the Slytherin boys would make those sort of lists; it seems a Slytherin thing to do.

Thunder rumbles in the sky and, together, we watch the rain pour down, onto the roof tops of Vertick Alley.

Very good ending. It's very visual; you can imagine it happening like you're watching the rain with them. I like stories that do that; it's something I try and do with my own.
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glisteninggold November 2 2006, 08:13:09 UTC

Thanks for your comment! I'm glad you like the ending.

Another part closer to the end.

breathingbooks October 28 2006, 14:45:16 UTC

*Sniffles*

So sad, cries my fluff-loving heart. Well, except for drunk Draco of course *g*.

glisteninggold November 2 2006, 08:13:40 UTC

Drunk Draco is always, always appropriate :) Thank you!

Next part up!

orngsnapdragon October 29 2006, 01:10:33 UTC

The Draco/Ron & Pansy was all very funny and cute, but the rest...)= Looking forward to the next part and Parvati's awakening. *crosses fingers*

glisteninggold November 2 2006, 08:14:24 UTC

Glad you're enjoying. I really appreciate the comments.

Next part here.