pesce potenziale, chapter one

[pomeqranate]

pesce potenziale, chapter one
pomeqranate
katekyo hitman reborn!, humor/drama; 2213, 13+

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[realityfinale]

oh my god lmao this is kind of amazing

[pomeqranate]

o-oh my god your icon is kind of amazing.

i'm glad you enjoyed it!

[realityfinale]

thanks, i try (; you will be seeing more of it because i will be following along now!!

[100paperfans]

So much potential humor for this! I'm looking forward to more~ Good luck to the both of you on your joint project!

[pomeqranate]

thank you! we hope not to disappoint.

[ideal_fairytale]

This is a really entertaining read. (: The writing reminds me a bit of someone I had known. Nice to see something like this. ^____^

[pomeqranate]

thanks a lot! i hope you like the next chapter just as much; expect some stylistic ping pong. (i adore your icon, by the way! do you know who made it?)

[ideal_fairytale]

Can't wait. (I got it a while ago, so I don't have a clue. .__.)

[pomeqranate]

WAIT, i just made a connection -- are you pris from this means WAR!? it's lace. /w-waves, i'm slow

[gauchecaesium]

This is quite the original storyline. Good as well, for it is AU without having too much distance from canon. Glad Leon's magical morphing abilities were included. Characterization - especially that of how Tsuna views Kyoko - is wonderful too.

/creeps to a corner to kuhaha at Tsuna's number of Facebook friends.

[pomeqranate]

thank you very much, qiu! staying close to canon's what we're going for; excepting a few major deviations (maybe? we'll see), it should follow the manga's skeleton.

/p-poor guy. just wait!

[eclats_de_voix]

smashmouth reference not lost on me. I love that song :3 I think you write hwo the characters speak better than amano whoa very good very good c: had to ughhh at the pseudoindulgently and I'm just going to guess it means falsely indulgent? I pretty much love how you vary between long and short sentence structure... yeah... no one can use a semi and reg colon like you- but some details I dont know where you're going with like the muscles of cellulose part-- still, I lost myself reading it. How did you get this au idea?

[pomeqranate]

score! i love it, too. there'll be more where that came from. xmzbv you're too nice, pink; i was worried reborn/gokudera (especially the latter) were off. i'm unclear on how characters refer to each other, too. do you know if there's a guide online or something? i ran into one forever ago, but i've forgotten where it was.

HAHA, it just slipped out and i couldn't resist leaving it in. that's what it means; i'm just saying it in a ~hipper~ way. ah, the cellulose thing was a reference back to tsuna's "i want to be a potato" mantra; he figures he'd be more useful feeding someone than, uh, being himself. is there anything else that confused you?

OH GOD, well, it happened way back when i'd just started the future arc. i was sitting around listening to music and the image of tsuna screaming popped into my head and it just... went from there after i remembered that five man band trope. it's planned through the varia arc. uh, really, it was just a product of me being reeeeaaaaaaally bored one afternoon, haha. but it's fun to write. thanks

[eclats_de_voix]

well, I do know of this reborn guide: http://www.lunaescence.com/fics/viewstory.php?sid=11541

though I don't know one for gokudera. Though, I do think you did a really good job and that you hit them on the nail pretty neatly :) I don't remember that potato line XD I need to reread the serious I suppose :X

And its no biggie. I like your style~

[pomeqranate]

oh wow, that's really interesting. i think i might be spending some time on that site later, haha. thank you!

vaskdsm don't even bother; it was a (typically) lame joke/reference to that lord of the rings musical mash-up on the many ways of cooking potatoes.

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