You replied to my comment so I couldn't edit it. DOOOORK!
Btw, I love the icon. :D "Get back here!"
Now, for feedback. :D
I was so excited cause when you sent this to me the first time, you didn't have as much information on Alisha Spence, but then reading this new and improved part, you had so much more detail and it made it more awesome than it already was!
I'm a creepy person cause I want to know more about the murders, aren't I? Meh, my creepiness helps you in the long run. :D
Now, onto more fun stuff:
When can we get Rachel? I want more Rachel. Where's Rachel? Gimme Rachel.
See? I said I'd do it. And now I have.
Also, hurry up at that game and go home and WRITE WRITE WRITE! (I want more Rachel, now!)
The icon is AWESOME. :D Jodie is the bestest at giving me pretty things.
And dude, you know I have to elaborate when I go back over everything. Usually it's just bare bones when I send it to you the first time around. I'm glad you approve of the additions. :D
Ooh, I'm glad you mentioned that, because I want to go into more detail than I have so far. We must discuss this tomorrow if you are around after work. I have ideas I want to bounce of you, MT. ;)
AND LEAVE ME ALONE ABOUT RACHEL. YOU'RE GOING TO GET LOTS OF HER. YOU KNOW THIS ALREADY.
I'm back from the game and planning on writing a little, but I'm tired. So maybe I won't. :p
Yay, update! This is really fleshed out and awesome. :D I'm sure it'll be even more awesome once Rachel arrives. ;) Kidding. I loved the interaction between Santana and Quinn and Puck and Finn and all of them. :D
Haha... well, I figured since I was going to have an extremely long day, I might as well post an update. :p
I'm glad that you came back even though there's no sign of Rachel yet. ;) I pay a lot of attention to detail, sometimes too much. Sometimes I need someone to tell me to stop rambling. Heh. I hope it doesn't get too boring.
Yay there's more than just Quinn! ;) Rachel is coming... though you'll have to wait through two more parts before her. *gasp* The horror. :D
So I was looking at it and it might have been three parts. But I'll just combine two of them. Pretty much everything I have written so far is introductory, so I feel bad not posting it all at once, but I need to have some encouragement to continue.. and I can't post without having some backup. Once I really get going it won't be so much a play by play like it is now.
So yes. TWO MORE PARTS! Then you will be telling me how you miss the days without Rachel. ;) Just kidding, of course. Rachel Berry is love. :D
Yay! I hope the updates won't be too short from here on out. I just needed to break up the first bit because otherwise I would post pretty much everything I have before I'm ready. ;) I'm glad you like that I'm giving backstory, because I can't really help it. I'm such a dork, I have like... their whole lives up to this point (and obviously beyond) in my head, so I want to draw from that wherever possible.
Yeah, it's going to be dark from time to time, but I hope to temper that so it has some balance to it. Rachel will be around after another two parts. *hides*
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Btw, I love the icon. :D "Get back here!"
Now, for feedback. :D
I was so excited cause when you sent this to me the first time, you didn't have as much information on Alisha Spence, but then reading this new and improved part, you had so much more detail and it made it more awesome than it already was!
I'm a creepy person cause I want to know more about the murders, aren't I? Meh, my creepiness helps you in the long run. :D
Now, onto more fun stuff:
When can we get Rachel? I want more Rachel. Where's Rachel? Gimme Rachel.
See? I said I'd do it. And now I have.
Also, hurry up at that game and go home and WRITE WRITE WRITE! (I want more Rachel, now!)
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The icon is AWESOME. :D Jodie is the bestest at giving me pretty things.
And dude, you know I have to elaborate when I go back over everything. Usually it's just bare bones when I send it to you the first time around. I'm glad you approve of the additions. :D
Ooh, I'm glad you mentioned that, because I want to go into more detail than I have so far. We must discuss this tomorrow if you are around after work. I have ideas I want to bounce of you, MT. ;)
AND LEAVE ME ALONE ABOUT RACHEL. YOU'RE GOING TO GET LOTS OF HER. YOU KNOW THIS ALREADY.
I'm back from the game and planning on writing a little, but I'm tired. So maybe I won't. :p
What do you think of that icon? :D
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I'm glad that you came back even though there's no sign of Rachel yet. ;) I pay a lot of attention to detail, sometimes too much. Sometimes I need someone to tell me to stop rambling. Heh. I hope it doesn't get too boring.
Yay there's more than just Quinn! ;) Rachel is coming... though you'll have to wait through two more parts before her. *gasp* The horror. :D
Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Heh, I ramble too so I can emphasise. :)
YAY. She's coming. TWO MORE PARTS?! I don't know if I can survive that. ;) Just kidding. :D
You are welcome. :)
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So yes. TWO MORE PARTS! Then you will be telling me how you miss the days without Rachel. ;) Just kidding, of course. Rachel Berry is love. :D
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I love this story a lot. &hearts
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Yeah, it's going to be dark from time to time, but I hope to temper that so it has some balance to it. Rachel will be around after another two parts. *hides*
Thanks so much for the feedback! :)
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