Spirit Exchange Fic! Holiday Trappings, for overthetiber

Dec 22, 2010 19:29


Holiday Wish Fulfilled for: overthetiber

Title: Holiday Trappings
Rating: PG-13
Pairings/Characters: Santana/Mercedes, implied Quinn/Mercedes, Puck/Mercedes and Santana/Puck
Warnings: None, really, unless I have to warn for girls kissing
Word count: 1,422
Disclaimer: This Glee fanfiction is based upon the television show of the same name. All characters and ( Read more... )

pairing: mercedes/santana, character: santana lopez, rating: pg 13, character: mercedes jones, ! spirit exchange, author: auchic

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dropsofviolet December 22 2010, 19:46:57 UTC
I really enjoyed this! What a fun rarepair, and I loved the M/Q too. I think you have really good character voices. I would have liked a few more dialogue tags but overall this was a really good read.

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auchic January 3 2011, 02:21:04 UTC
Yay! I really really loved writing this; it was so much fun.

I would have liked a few more dialogue tags

Argh! I wanted to, but man, it was getting long. And it's really hard to keep up the conversation without anything else to hold it up!

Still, I'm glad you like it, that's what I wanted the most!

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becca_radcgg December 23 2010, 00:43:55 UTC
Anon, it takes a lot of guts to pull off an entirely dialogue fic and make it work, especially when the characters have such similar speech patterns. You did a wonderful job. I laughed each time I read this, and I don't even ship these girls.

Loved the bathroom makeout session. =D

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auchic January 3 2011, 02:21:50 UTC
Loved the bathroom makeout session.

Yup. Best part man.

Thank you for reading and loving. You are the best.

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overthetiber December 23 2010, 19:12:53 UTC
Aaah, this is adorable and fantastic! The voices are spot-on, the progression seems unforced and natural, and it's altogether pretty much exactly what I wanted. :) Thank you! (And how did you know I ship Mercedes/Quinn, anon? How did you know?!)

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auchic January 3 2011, 02:27:17 UTC
OMG YAY, I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED THIS!

Seriously, you have no idea. I was so nervous about writing this, even though I picked that prompt! But amazingly, the idea came to me, and it just flowed like crazy and I had a blast writing it. Mercedes was hard to write, because I wanted her to be all awesome!Mercedes, but she just kept coming out all thoughtfulandsad!Mercedes. So Santana overcompensates a bit, heh heh.

And I ship me some Quinn/Mercedes, so I had to add that in. I was a little nervous about that because not everyone ships things, but it worked out okay, so cool!

Awesome! Thanks for reading and I'm so so so so so glad you liked this!

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wishfulclicking December 27 2010, 15:36:32 UTC
This was fun to read.

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auchic January 3 2011, 02:27:50 UTC
It was fun to write! Thanks for reading!

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absolutam December 31 2010, 05:59:39 UTC
This is a great rarepair and writing!

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auchic January 3 2011, 02:29:07 UTC
Yay! I'm glad you liked it! It is a great rarepair, because these girls are totally the HBIC! And Mercedes doesn't get enough love.

Thanks for reading!

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