HSN Exchange Fic: Dancing, Fiesta, Romancing, Siesta, for lynnearlington

Aug 18, 2010 08:44

Title: Dancing, Fiesta, Romancing, Siesta
Rating: NC-17
Pairings/Characters: Brittana (Brittany/Santana)
Warnings: None. All vanilla here.
Word count: ~2500
Disclaimer: This Glee fanfiction is based upon the television show of the same name. All characters and situations other than my own are sole property of Ryan Murphy Productions and 20th Century Fox ( Read more... )

! hot summer nights fic exchange, character: brittany, character: santana lopez, rating: nc 17, author: susurrusnight, pairing: brittany/santana

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dofuneralscount August 18 2010, 16:39:11 UTC
This was made of so much win! Cuteness, hotness, cuteness...and more cuteness....But I saw the convo on the "if my heart were a compass" and I thought you were doing Rachel/Quinn....? Not that I'm complaining Brittana is my OTP.

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dofuneralscount August 18 2010, 18:41:16 UTC
I am sincerely glad that you enjoyed the fic, and I mean this in the nicest sense, but I think you might be confused. I don't think I am who you think I am. But thank you anyway!

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dofuneralscount August 18 2010, 19:12:46 UTC
Um...yeah I think your right lol XD

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anonymous August 19 2010, 02:30:16 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Ha ha, no, it's not bad at all. Writing Miguel was definitely fun; I've always imagined Santana to be a bitchy-but-protective older sister. It's also really nice to hear that the overall lazy-summer-morning feeling came across. Thanks so much for taking the time to comment!

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arishako August 19 2010, 04:15:15 UTC
This story was so adorable that I can't even think properly to leave a better review. So I'm just gonna list things back at you.

My favorite things about this:
1. Coach Sylvester's bounty hunting day
2. Santana's epic relationship with her epic little brother
3. That she is so un-subtle, even 11 year olds already know about Brittany and her
4. Brittany just walks around other people's houses pantsless ♥
5. Froot loops + Saturday morning cartoons = most adorable relationship bonding moment ever
6. That Santana and Brittany are together, but they don't get overly jealous when it comes to parties and dancing and such
7. Brittany is just basically a sex monster, but Santana puts up with her anyway
8. "It's not crap"

Basically, my face hurts from smiling so much.

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arishako August 19 2010, 14:30:09 UTC
It's always nice to see what individual bits people liked, so a list is a completely acceptable/awesome form of review! Facial pain aside, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to comment.

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fuzzy_paint August 20 2010, 18:27:42 UTC
This was uber sweet and I think you fit the prompt wonderfully! I adored Miguel and his relationship with Santana (she seems the type to pick on her younger brother, if she has one), and I love how you've captured the early Saturday morning laziness in this story, especially with the way Santana wants slow morning sex (yay!). ♥

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fuzzy_paint August 21 2010, 18:33:53 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! This prompt was a fun one. Saturday mornings have a really distinct feel to me, so I'm really glad I was able to get that across. In my headcanon Santana is totally a bitchy-but-protective older sister, who mostly ignores her brother except when he really needs her, and loves him a lot but will never admit it. Thanks so much for commenting!

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becca_radcgg August 23 2010, 01:27:35 UTC
Awwww, anon, this was pure sweet cuteness! I really enjoyed the lethargic feel of it all, with Santana's cottonball filled mouth and head. The slow, lazy feel of watching morning cartoons on the couch with your bff and sometimes sex-buddy. It was just great.

Also, I love that Brittany loves Garfield. He's one of my favourites! :)

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becca_radcgg August 23 2010, 16:07:35 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Garfield is awesome. I loved watching that cartoon as a kid, so I really wanted to incorporate it here. It's nice to know other people like it as much as I do. Thanks for commenting!

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