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Puck's Happy Shower Time... (Puck/Rachel) NC-17

Apr 12, 2010 18:07

Title: Puck's Happy Shower Time, And How It Was Fucking Awesome
Author: auchicRating: Somewhere on that border between R and NC-17 ( Read more... )

pairing: puck/rachel, author: auchic

Comments 3

bklyangel April 13 2010, 01:08:45 UTC

Please remember to use your author tag!

Esra

Now time for feedback bklyangel April 13 2010, 01:24:37 UTC

First, super hot!

Second, SUPER HOT!!! (yes it needed to be stated twice!)

I think you've really captured Pucks voice. Normally when I read a fic, I don't actually have the character's voice saying the line in my head

Only his mom; she doesn’t care if he up and died from blue balls.
I actually cracked up on this line.

work on some much needed hand-to-Puck senior (his cock is no fucking “junior”)
This line is Puck!

andbless_mybaby April 13 2010, 02:08:04 UTC

HAHAHAHAHA, yessssssssss!

Did I preview this one at some point? I know that I did, because I remember the Puck Jr. thing that Esra quoted. And of course, I laughed just as hard the second time.

“I’ve never seen one in the flesh,” she said and then holy good fucking god she knelt down. “It’s so…real,” she whispered.

Oh, Rachel.

LOVED IT.