V-DAY EXCHANGE FIC! the things we've handed down, for goldstar94

Feb 25, 2010 09:24

Title: the things we’ve handed down
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: major angst related to premature birth and giving a child up for adoption
Pairings/Characters: Puck/Quinn
Word count: 2,400
Recipient: goldstar94
Disclaimer: This story is a work of fiction, and no copyright infringement was intended.
Summary: Quinn had her baby. It’s both a beginning and an end.
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pairing: puck/quinn, ! v-day fic exchange, rating: pg 13, author: andbless_mybaby

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badboy_fangirl February 25 2010, 19:45:59 UTC
Gah. The baby issue gets me in my tear ducts, every time. I can't imagine a harder choice to make than giving your baby away, and the idea that they didn't even get to hold her is just...CRUEL.

I suspect I know the author of this based solely on the sick feeling in the pit of my stomach.

The flowers with not-enough-change was just too teenagery and heartbreaking too.

*wipes eyes*

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becca_radcgg February 26 2010, 00:27:20 UTC
So much love for this story.

So much.

The bouquets all had the anemic, underfed charm of hothouses and cargo jets.

Something about this image.... is so real and heartbreaking. The first time I read it it struck me... and continued to do so the following three times. Such a lovely paragraph. (so I re-read it, what of it? You starting something there A.A.?)

"I think she wants out. Life in a box can’t be too fun, you know?”

Such a Puck thing to say. A puck-ish sentiment if you will. And yet incredibly honest and profound.

She cried for a long time.

Eventually he did, too.

Classy ending, A.A.! Broken and healing and together. The only way they'll possible make it through whole at the other end of the tunnel.

Very well written.

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wishfulclicking February 26 2010, 19:12:39 UTC
I loved so much about this. Everyone felt so in character.

The story was sad yet perfect.

That ending was just wonderful.

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only_because3 February 28 2010, 19:34:04 UTC
UGH! My heart hurts so much right now! This was all just so side... Him not having enough change for the flowers, Quinn not being able to hold her... *cries*

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