V-DAY EXCHANGE FIC! Prone Position, for becca_radcgg

[gleefics_exch]

Title: Prone Position
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Warnings: Light BDSM, under age sex, angst
Word Count: 4473
Recipient:: becca_radcgg
Disclaimer: No infringement intended, just flexing my creative muscles, no money was made with this endeavor.
Summary: Puck's progression from the summer before his freshman year of high school to his reluctant teenage

Comments

[hpchickadee]

This story is absolutely fantastic!

I read it because the recipient is one of my closest LJ peeps, and gosh, I'm glad I did. The emotions were real and raw, and the sex - forbidden though it may have been - was quite hot.

Mystery Writer, you're an amazing author...your use of first person is perfect here. It's rare in the world of fanfic, and that's probably a good thing, since it's difficult to write! :)

Fabulous job! I can't wait to find out who put this one together! ♥

[badboy_fangirl]

I love the additions you made to this. Weaves in perfectly, and the ending is just THE BEST. *sniff* *pats Puck*

My soft drink choices are just fine, for the record.

[becca_radcgg]

Okay, there is way too much to squee about in this fic so bear with me. Is that even the right kind of bear? I'm not sure, but whatever.

Those were the last words he ever said to me, maybe not at my face, but, you know... addressed to me.

What an ass! I love this. It's so... Puck. He's just so... removed from it. Even now. You know that it must have been a pivotal moment for him because he treats it so matter-of-factly.

"Hi! Mrs. Puckerman!" Finn opened the door, and she just looked at him like he'd grown antlers. It was like, 'that's right, you still have his mother fucking name', and so did I.

That is heartbreaking. Completely heartbreaking. Because it's really the first wake-up call for Puck and his mom. Like a big, "hello, he left you, but you still have to be reminded of him every second for the rest of your life."

I wouldn't want to look at me either, I look just like him. Ah, that line is one of those hidden gems. You know, one of those lines that just speaks so clearly of the character and the head space

[hpchickadee]

Told you it was awesome! :D You got a really great gift!

[wander_lust_79]

amazing job!!!! this was...wow...really great fic!

[andbless_mybaby]

Becca got SPOILED.

Hot, in-character, well-written, and angsty. It hit every note. Overall? Amazing.

Great job, you. ♥