This is so random...RyoheiXHibari

Apr 06, 2008 00:04

I promised cleartempest porn, but then I watched "Atonement" and I wanted to write some tragedy. So...tragic porn, maybe?

Unspoken

The moon shone overhead in the midnight sky, blanketing Namimori in soft, revealing light. But deep in the bowels of the Vongola base, no light shone to disturb the denizens of their underground kingdom. Hidden from ( Read more... )

khr: hibari, hitman reborn!, fanfiction, khr: ryohei

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teapoit April 6 2008, 22:59:01 UTC
Oh, I love you so much right now. Hibari is a pain to write - I'm not always convinced, but you really had him down. And anxious, talking-about-dying-during-sex!Ryohei made me happy and GUUH all at once.

They are here, therefore they fight and die like the rest of them.

Favourite line. ♥

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glasssubway April 7 2008, 01:54:19 UTC
*laughs* Hibari is rather easy to me, it's Ryohei that I was so afraid that I was breaking character with.

They are here, therefore they fight and die like the rest of them.
It's lines like that that make me think "Wow, I'm not half bad at this..." XD

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cleartempest April 9 2008, 00:32:17 UTC
OMGOMGOMG HIBARYO??? LIEK, EPIC WIN. Why you so good?

There was plot, yes, especially since this was set TYL, which made it that much more tragic/desperate (blah incoherant right know). Anyways, this was hot and so IC. YOU ACTUALLY MADE HIBARI WANTING SEX IC. And the REST and the ENDING...T_T ehhh, I want to read this again...

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glasssubway April 9 2008, 01:57:47 UTC
I NEVER WROTE THEM BEFORE BUT THANK GOD IT CAME OUT ALRIGHT! Maybe I'm good because I lack any other sort of talent? Could be ^-^

I'M SURE HIBARI HAS NATURAL URGES LIKE THE REST OF THE WORLD. He just would never express them...he gets topped a lot, now that I think about it, have you noticed? Anyway...SINCE IT WAS SORT OF FOR YOU, I'M GLAD YOU LOVE IT

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cleartempest April 9 2008, 03:39:47 UTC
Haha, XD, yesss, I have noticed that he is topped alot. Like with D18, 8018, 6918, and of course R18 (hahaha, that's like the 'warning this contains smut' rating. XDD). He only tops in the 1827 fandom. But, then again, everybody tops Tsuna. And I saw one 1859 crack fic before, but it was only implied sex. I think alot of the ukes aren't very uke-ish at all (EXCEPT TSUNA), Like Hibari and Gokudera. And I haven't read Squalo uke yet, but I heard it's the norm, and HE is not very uke-ish! Maybe that's why I like making him top Dino. LIEK OMG, WHY WAS THIS REPLY SO LONG?! T_T

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glasssubway April 10 2008, 00:21:11 UTC
YOUR LONG REPLIES ARE ALWAYS FUN! (and so is that icon, even though I hate Xanxus with a burning passion) What is it about Hibari? Probably because it's fun to write about forcing him to submit. Squalo uke is the norm? I can't picture that at all (Unless it's with Xanxus, but there aren't many of those) he's too dominant and agressive. YES SQUALOxDINO! (I read your story of that pairing on fanfiction.net. Did I say that already somewhere? I don't remember, but it was amazing *worships*)

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p3rk3le September 8 2008, 00:03:55 UTC
WAAAAH!! That was FREAKING AWESOME, and i dont even go for Ryohei-hibari... waaaah *dazed*

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cesia_dalia December 15 2009, 21:52:58 UTC
OMG! EXTREME! XD That was very well written. I'm a bit over a year off, but it seems my scrounging paid off. -sigh of happiness- Even though it was a bit depressing, it made me happy.

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