A beautiful piece with a hint of melancholy. This has the kind of feeling I always get from reading the Future!Arc and when hearing that everyone is dying and everyone is getting bittersweet and stuff.
I love how you write TYL!Hibari~ (and Dino was cute, like always)
...You always make me want to give Dino a hug. So mean. ; ;
But it's definitely bittersweet rather than just sad. Simply lovely, as usual.
Re: indirect kisses: I always held Ashley's interpretation. Once in sophomore year myself and a bunch of the former anime club kids actually worked out a flow chart of which people in the club had indirectly kissed. It was... very complicated.
I'm getting better at writing, I've noticed. Like, substantially so; I went back last night and looked over a whole bunch of my earlier stuff and I was like "Wow...I've really improved!"
Hence I can now do bittersweet and not just sad.
IDK, the only time had heard the term "indirect kiss" before was when I read Midnight's Children by Salman Rushdie (it's an amazing book) and they talk about it...like, the man uses (or kisses, but whatever) the tea cup and passes it to the woman and she does the same and that's an indirect kiss. So Ashley's defintion made me go O.O REALLY?!
(He just seemed like a logical choice. And did you notice I snuck in a Rufus Wainwright reference?)
That's a really cool feeling, isn't it? I can't do that with my fiction, but when I reread my essays, I always get a little thrill to see that I've improved.
It's a logical extension, really. My new understanding of it is that indirect kisses can be passed through people or objects (or Hibirds).
(Oh, I assumed. I'M ON TO YOU. He likely is dead TYL. Logically, he should have been executed after the Varia Arc, but this is Reborn!, not the real world. And probably Tsuna would have been upset. Regardless, am I the only person in fandom who loves/hates Xanxus instead of just hating him? No! Where is it? ; ; I'll go back and listen tonight and study up, haha.)
Well, it's only with fanfiction because I haven't churned out anything original lately (though I'm working), but it is so very very cool.
I guess I should have known it would work with people too...
(YOU'LL NEVER BE ABLE TO PROVE IT IN A COURT OF LAW. Yeah, well...we all know that the events of TYL will be reverted and there will somehow be a happy ending, even for people like Xanxus. I don't know about that, though, why don't you post and ask? You could take a poll or something. Just to be nice, it comes from "Gay Messiah" and it's fairly obvious)
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I love how you write TYL!Hibari~ (and Dino was cute, like always)
Can I get my own Hibird too? :< IT'S SO FLUFFY.
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I WANT A HIBIRD TOO! Where could we find such a thing?
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.. In Hibird Land? :( Maybe I'll just get a canary and pretend it's Hibird. It's so. so.. cute. <3
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But it's definitely bittersweet rather than just sad. Simply lovely, as usual.
Re: indirect kisses: I always held Ashley's interpretation. Once in sophomore year myself and a bunch of the former anime club kids actually worked out a flow chart of which people in the club had indirectly kissed. It was... very complicated.
(Also, I know you enjoyed killing off Xanxus. :P)
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Hence I can now do bittersweet and not just sad.
IDK, the only time had heard the term "indirect kiss" before was when I read Midnight's Children by Salman Rushdie (it's an amazing book) and they talk about it...like, the man uses (or kisses, but whatever) the tea cup and passes it to the woman and she does the same and that's an indirect kiss. So Ashley's defintion made me go O.O REALLY?!
(He just seemed like a logical choice. And did you notice I snuck in a Rufus Wainwright reference?)
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It's a logical extension, really. My new understanding of it is that indirect kisses can be passed through people or objects (or Hibirds).
(Oh, I assumed. I'M ON TO YOU. He likely is dead TYL. Logically, he should have been executed after the Varia Arc, but this is Reborn!, not the real world. And probably Tsuna would have been upset. Regardless, am I the only person in fandom who loves/hates Xanxus instead of just hating him?
No! Where is it? ; ; I'll go back and listen tonight and study up, haha.)
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I guess I should have known it would work with people too...
(YOU'LL NEVER BE ABLE TO PROVE IT IN A COURT OF LAW. Yeah, well...we all know that the events of TYL will be reverted and there will somehow be a happy ending, even for people like Xanxus. I don't know about that, though, why don't you post and ask? You could take a poll or something.
Just to be nice, it comes from "Gay Messiah" and it's fairly obvious)
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*speechless*
thats actually... whoaaaa my fav i know i said that already twice but it is..... whoaaaaa
ja, ne? till you write some more D18 *hugs*
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