The Popular Kids (Prologue) R

[glasheen25]

Title: The Popular Kids
Author: glasheen25
Rating: R
Pairings/Characters: Finn/Quinn, Puck, Rachel, ensemble
Warnings: character death, strong language, some sexual scenes
Spoilers: for all of season 1
Word count: 733
Disclaimer: This Glee fanfiction is based upon the television show of the same name. All characters and situations other than my own are sole

Comments

[phelipa]

:O
What is this!? New fic from you!? Yay!!
Your writing is impeccable, the descriptions are perfect and so real. You can definitely feel the absolute terror and anguish, especially at the end. I'm excited to see where this is going, can't wait for the next chapter! I'm anxious to find out who it is...they know her name...hmmmm

[glasheen25]

Yay:) Glad you enjoyed it ♥

Thank you for the wonderful review ♥

[labels304]

This is a great start. I've always thought Glee needed a little murder mystery. And a guess from the title that this killer is going after the popular kids???

Can't for next chapter.

[glasheen25]

Yay!!!! glad you enjoyed it ♥

[fuzzy_paint]

This detail was especially fantastic: The place where she'd shared her first kiss with Finn Hudson, her lips on his sticky with cherry lipgloss and his hands sweaty against her back I really love the tactile imagery of it! I think it adds a lot.

Can't wait for the rest! (I love whodunits!)

[glasheen25]

I love whodunits as well!!! I think I've watched too much Cold Case/Criminal Minds etc. in my time:)

Anyway, glad you enjoyed it ♥

[baggels]

I am so intrigued by this and can't wait for more! This bit totally got me: The place where she'd shared her first kiss with Finn Hudson, her lips on his sticky with cherry lipgloss and his hands sweaty against her back.

Fantastic detail... it all made my heart ache. Wonderful job! :)

[glasheen25]

Thanks for your wonderful review:) I'm glad you enjoyed it ♥

[narnialover7]

Great story! Can't wait for the rest of the story! :-)

[glasheen25]

Yay:) Glad you enjoyed it:) (Forgot to log in first time)