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Prompt #090: Fair

Jul 11, 2013 12:39

Title: Consequences
Pairing/Characters: Tommy/Brian
Rating (Word Count): NC17 (12x100)
Warning(s): none
Content: Established D/s relationship, Orgasm Denial
Author's notes: So much thanks to @leela_cat and @ArianneMaya for the preread and reassurances. *hugs you both* <333 I've been wanting to write Tommy/Brian pretty much since Brian first ( Read more... )

author: toobusy2write, character: brian london, character: tommy joe ratliff, prompt #090: fair

Comments 11

casey270 July 11 2013, 20:11:23 UTC

can i just say thank you for writing such a strong sub & not taking away all their personality & color & spark? this is so, so good

toobusy2write July 11 2013, 20:21:42 UTC

Thank YOU, bb! :D You have no idea how thrilled I am to hear that Tommy came across that way in this and that their characterizations rang true for you. I was *so* nervous about posting this because it's a side of D/s I don't normally write about.

the_minx_17 July 11 2013, 21:21:31 UTC

I love you for this alone:

*On a side note, since discipline vs punishment vs correction is a complicated subject in the D/s world, for the purposes of this fic (and because it's how my Dom and I have defined it) I'm going with: discipline = a system of rules for behavior; correction = a reprimand/reminder (either verbal or by action, such as a light smack to the thigh or ass); punishment = a penalty imposed due to accidentally or incidentally breaking agreed upon rules (deliberate disobedience garners a whole other level of punishment that has nothing to do with this fic).

*off to read the fic now*

the_minx_17 July 11 2013, 21:34:18 UTC

OH JESUS FUCK WOMAN. I want the scene in three days. NOT LYING.

I love this peep into one side of a D/s relationship. Thank you for this. Sincerely. (Still want the scene in three days... good lord, Tommy falling apart on Brian's dick... WANT!)

toobusy2write July 11 2013, 21:59:56 UTC

I am beyond thrilled you enjoyed the fic so much, bb. <333

And LOL, I wish I could give it to you in three days. Unfortunately, that's when I'm leaving town, but I will write it when I get back, for sure. :)

toobusy2write July 11 2013, 21:57:04 UTC

Already told you this on twitter, but thanks bb! <333

anonymous July 11 2013, 21:49:55 UTC

OMG, this is beyond hot. Love the interactions between the two of them, and the emotions Tommy cycles through, as he processes dealing with his punishment. Great stuff! <333

toobusy2write July 11 2013, 22:02:46 UTC

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it. <333

aislinntlc July 11 2013, 22:08:43 UTC

Oh, and that comment was me - no idea why LJ logged me out. :p

Can't wait to see what happens when punishment's ended!

arianne_maya July 12 2013, 12:31:40 UTC

I'm so, so glad we managed to convince you to post this :D This is so damn hot and I love the relationship you're painting here. And, fyi, I'm joining the chorus asking for the scene at the end of the three days because we need it :D

vlredreign July 12 2013, 19:22:50 UTC

JUPITER'S FUCKING COCK.

I LOVE YOU. INSANELY. THAT IS ALL.

Congratulations, you have earned the Brian Kinney/Justin Taylor 107 Fuck award. This icon doesn't get awarded easily. :)