Comments | glad_fics: hip to hip, knee to knee [nose to nose, cheek to cheek]

gladdecease in glad_fics

hip to hip, knee to knee [nose to nose, cheek to cheek]

Apr 27, 2008 22:59

Title: hip to hip, knee to knee
Characters: Robin POV, Barney/Robin
Spoilers: 3.16, "Sandcastles in the Sand"
Notes: random!first!himym!fic, what d'you know? Caught me by surprise too. But this show...I can't explain it.

( They watched that video fourteen times that night. )

w: sexual (+), wc: 0500-1000, type: one shot, f: how i met your mother

Comments 17

charmedone_3 April 28 2008, 04:23:21 UTC

Aww... very good.

I love the "the couch was long empty" line.
Awesome job.

gladdecease April 28 2008, 05:07:05 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it; that line's one of my favorites.

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gladdecease April 28 2008, 05:08:14 UTC

Aw, thank you!

I think it's anticipation. Less than 24 hours before we see the aftermath, you know! I know I'm excited.

kelbelle April 28 2008, 04:29:39 UTC

This is great. I like how you described all the different video viewings.

Also, your icon text is so FTW.

gladdecease April 28 2008, 05:13:17 UTC

Thanks! I spent a bit too much time rewatching those last few minutes, and it got me to writing out the situation as I saw it.

I could say the same to yours!

allthingsholy April 28 2008, 04:46:28 UTC

Very nice. Well done.

gladdecease April 28 2008, 05:13:51 UTC

Thank you!

christ_chexx_4u April 28 2008, 05:51:57 UTC

i don't think i'm EVER going to get tired of 'sandcastles' fics. EVER. i just think that this moment - that 'what's going to happen, should i make it happen, should i wait for him to make it happen, HOW do i make it happen without looking like an obvious spaz?' moment - is so universal, and i love everyone capturing it in their own way.

ending is SUPERB!

gladdecease April 28 2008, 07:26:35 UTC

It's the kind of pivotal point in a relationship you can't help but wonder about, isn't it? You want it to go one way, but you really don't know how it will go. And thus, to make it go every way you want it, fic! (well said on that description of the moment--I think you've got it down pat.)

Thanks!