One Last Try, chapter 27

Aug 19, 2009 09:32

Author's note: Chapter 27 is here! After hours of work! I hope you will like this chapter. I had a great time writing it, but sometimes it was a real pain... But i'm looking forward for your comments! Enjoy!

The handle felt cold under Guy’s hand as he closed Edward’s door. He had seen so many people die before - by his own hands mostly. Hearing the ( Read more... )

fic: one last try, author: gizxmaz, chapter 27

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thymelady August 19 2009, 08:47:08 UTC
Isn't Lily the BEST!? Yes, she is. It's decided, Lady Lily is the best. :-) And ooohhh - flirting with Allan a Dale! Lovely! And hitting Guy over the head, yay!

Good thing Guy went in to console Marian - a lovely, lovely scene!

And Guy letting his feelings out, fetching Jenny... Basically putting two and tow together...

And the sum is? Kill the sheriff!! YEAH! *happy and evil laughter*

Don't like what's up with Robin and Sir Albert... Which just show how exciting this is getting!

Great work! :-D

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gizxmaz August 19 2009, 19:42:15 UTC
I know! Lady Lily is so the best! I can only agree to 112%!
- both flirting and hitting people? She's perfect!

Thank you so much!

I grateful for your comment! Made me laugh! And i'm looking forward for more of your comments! :D

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kolibrichen August 19 2009, 12:35:31 UTC
*hurray* another chapter :D

I love the way in which Guy comforts Marian *sigh* but I'm a little worried about the outcome of Guy's plan ;)

so: tack så mycket pa denna magnifik kapitel (o.k. back to the Swedish books *blush*)

I can't wait to read more *jumping up and down*

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gizxmaz August 19 2009, 19:47:43 UTC
New chapter indeed! :D

Thank you! Well, you know our Guy... he is hero and can not be killed. (Atleast I don't think he can... I haven't asked him...) *wink*

Haha, ingen orsak! :D

More will come, I will start planing the next chappie this weekend! :)

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sterni75 August 19 2009, 12:38:15 UTC
you did it!!! and the chapter is AMAZING hunnie *squeee*

i loved EVERYTHING and enjoyed to read it very much... i told you, you are a genius when it comes to writing *hugs you*

loved how you described all of the things that happened.... I`m so stunned..... and have to read it again... and than again because it´s soooo brilliant!

thank you so much ♥

can´t wait to read the next chapters sweetie :)

have a wonderful day and take care ♥

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gizxmaz August 19 2009, 19:53:24 UTC
Well hello sweetheart!

I'm so glad you liked the chapter! I really hoped you would be pleased! :D *hugs*

Ooh, you really think so? And I really am bad at describing things! Thank you!!

The next chapter will be under working soon! :)

Have a wonderful day to you too and take care! *hugs*

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leslieg August 19 2009, 13:46:20 UTC
Yes!!! Kill the Malevolent One!!!

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gizxmaz August 19 2009, 19:56:16 UTC
I couldn't agree more!!!

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mopphead August 19 2009, 14:18:33 UTC
Oh, Lily's a great character - no-one else could have got away with slapping Guy round the back of the head, and goodness, didn't he need it? He's so worried about doing the wrong thing with Marian that he can't work out how and when to do the right thing. He even has to be lectured on the nature of his relationship by a six year old child!

Ooh, a plot afoot to send the Troll into the Great Beyond - yay! I hope that between them they can come up with a plan, but it's a dangerous path they're going down...

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gizxmaz August 19 2009, 20:05:14 UTC
Lily is rather charming in her own ways, isn't she? I kind a like her! And yes, I don't think anyone would have the power to do that, slapping Guy in the back of his head I mean. *wink* And I think the six year old child is doing him some good right? :D

Yes, and I think dangerous is Guy's and Lily's middlename. Or rather, they think. So we'll have to see how it turns out. ;) Thank you for commenting!

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