Oh god, I <3 Pike! I enjoyed this part even more than part one. Poor hungover Bones, I want to give him a hug. Well, after shoving him into a shower, lol. But I'm so glad you caved to your Pike!muse wanting a bigger part. His reaction was perfect...amused, and yet not unsympathetic. And I'm glad he deleted the videos from StarNet, because yeah, Bones is definately not the sort who could just laugh something like that off.
So is there going to be a Part 3, where Bones rips Jim a new one for setting him up in the first place? Because I'd like to see that. :D It was one thing, Jim keeping that video to himself, but posting it? So not cool.
(BTW, there was one little mistake I caught back in part 2A...when Rowe entered Pike's office, you referred to it as being Monday morning at one point, when every other time it was Wednesday morning. It's in the paragraph that begins "Ten minutes later...")
I'm sure I replied to this over IM, but my OCD brain doesn't like comments sitting here, unloved as this has been for so long. I totally <3 Pike, too. He's awesome good fun to write. He's kind of how I see Reboot!Kirk in 20 years, and I'm sure Pike sees that in him as well. But dude, in literally *every* Star Trek fic I write, Pike's in my head, demanding to be written in. I actually have to not write him into some things I know he'd fit, just because I want to keep variety going in my work. I seriously think Pike is the best-kept secret of the fandom.
I'm not sure if I'll do a part 3. I have an idea for it, but I'm not sure if I can get it to work. Hee. That video's posting. Like me, Jim is a do it first, and think about it...maybe later type of person, so it's something I knew he'd get a kick out of.
Did I fix that typo? I'm not sure. Well, dammit. *goes off to check*
Enjoyed this! Only Jim could get Bones in that sort of trouble. :D And yay for Pike! Though I don't envy him the position of Academic Discipline. Thanks so much for this fic!
I think Jim could get Bones into whatever kind of trouble he wanted. Kirk has that way of convincing people to do strange things. And, I totally am in love with Pike. Devious bastard, isn't he? You're welcome, and thanks for the comments.
Lol! I never really started off as a Pike fan, but the man is such a BAMF, you can't help but love him. He's definitely one of the strongest muses I've got (as evidenced by how he just shows up in pretty much everything I write), but I certainly enjoy writing the character. Anyway, thanks for the comment and I'm glad you liked it.
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So is there going to be a Part 3, where Bones rips Jim a new one for setting him up in the first place? Because I'd like to see that. :D It was one thing, Jim keeping that video to himself, but posting it? So not cool.
(BTW, there was one little mistake I caught back in part 2A...when Rowe entered Pike's office, you referred to it as being Monday morning at one point, when every other time it was Wednesday morning. It's in the paragraph that begins "Ten minutes later...")
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I'm not sure if I'll do a part 3. I have an idea for it, but I'm not sure if I can get it to work. Hee. That video's posting. Like me, Jim is a do it first, and think about it...maybe later type of person, so it's something I knew he'd get a kick out of.
Did I fix that typo? I'm not sure. Well, dammit. *goes off to check*
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