Comments | gixi: Sierra Echo X-Ray

gixi

Sierra Echo X-Ray

Sep 07, 2008 15:56

Title: Sierra Echo X-Ray ( Read more... )

live free or die hard, john/matt, rating: nc-17

Comments 19

checkmatey September 7 2008, 21:35:54 UTC

i <3 this

just_air_left September 7 2008, 22:18:16 UTC

OMG i loved it

quiet__tiger September 8 2008, 00:27:57 UTC

This was really good. Definitely doesn't suck. Could use another non-exhausted read-through for some word mistakes (for example "around" when I believe you mean "arouse" in called Matt terrible things that used to around him. and I think you mean "put" here:but John had let him but the number in his cell ), but the story was good.

It'd be interesting to get John's POV on all of this, Matt whoring around, having sex with a guy for the first time, etc. It's definitely interesting to see Matt as a manwhore rather than inexperienced.

Nice work!

gixi September 8 2008, 00:36:57 UTC

Thanks for the corrections! I'll probably need to get someone to properly beta for me... I sort of suck at self-editing.

minttown1 September 8 2008, 02:13:20 UTC

This story is very, very good. I like the entire tone of it, and I love how elements recur. That makes it flow very well.

msofdarkness September 8 2008, 02:40:30 UTC

interesting for sure. never thought of the matt character in this light.