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I Can Soar: Extended Version

Dec 06, 2010 08:15

Title: I Can Soar
Author: giveitupjessica
Pairing: broken!jongkey, broken!2min, minkey, jongtae
Rating: PG-15
Summary: All he had to do was say those words and my whole world came crumbling down on me. I was broken with no intentions of getting fixed. I wanted to remain broken because if I didn't have him, what was the point? But you were there for me, never ( Read more... )

broken!2min, minkey, !fanfic, broken!jongkey, rating: pg-15, jongtae, oneshot!

Comments 8

wemwems December 6 2010, 16:22:28 UTC

DOUBLE SPOOTTT

wemwems December 6 2010, 16:45:44 UTC

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww... MinHo <3 He's just so perfect here.
Yay for MinKeyy!! Though I never really consider that combination... it works so perfectly here <3 But I also feel bad for Taemin in this one :( I mean he though Minho was with Key and and.. :( Well he's with Jonghyun now so I guess everything works out in the end :)
Me likey happy endingss XD

melalocket December 6 2010, 16:56:22 UTC

the extended version is great!!!
khekekekeke...

wow jjong i cant believe you said that..
you blame everything on kibum??!
yah! you such a jerk!!!

kaybee38 December 7 2010, 02:22:22 UTC

Beautiful. Both version. But now I want more....

WoW, That Was New & Shocking doneitall December 7 2010, 09:04:05 UTC

Even though you said there would be broken 2Min, & JongKey I still read, and I'm glad I did. It was really great. I hope they all find happiness. Especially Onew, and Key.

Re: WoW, That Was New & Shocking doneitall December 7 2010, 09:04:31 UTC

Don't know why I added Onew, but he's there.

eoryndal December 7 2010, 22:24:59 UTC

I'm very infrequently online these days so I haven't read the original version of this yet. But this extended version is absolutely beautiful.

I think the first person POV is a very good choice here *thumbs up*

I can't believe Jonghyun is such a jerk in this story! >.< Gaaah
But Minho is such a warmhearted, loyal friend, not even blaming Key when his own relationship with Taemin breaks. I'm sure he'll be able to put Key back together <3

The rollercoaster part reminded me of my first ride on a huge rollercoaster. When we slowly went up to the first drop, I felt like I'd explode from adrenaline, I remember I was thinking it was a very fucking bad idea and I just wanted to get the hell out of that thing.
In the end, I couldn't get enough and I still love rollercoasters ^^

On a side note, even though I did feel bad for Key, I enjoyed the HyunMin sexing xD

Can I somehow coax you into writing this from Taemin's POV? *___* That would make my day! Maybe my whole life :D
<3

giveitupjessica December 9 2010, 03:50:53 UTC

done and done. DEDICATE