Fic: No Time For Wolves (A Song of Ice and Fire) [02/08]

[girlupnorth]

Title: No Time For Wolves
Author: girlupnorth
Rating: strong PG-13
Pairings: Jon/Sansa; Petyr/Sansa; Jon/Daenerys
Disclaimer: A song of ice and fire belongs to George RR Martin, and I am not making any profit off this story.
Length: 2,635 words (~19,000 total)
Spoilers: Including A Feast for CrowsSummary: In which Jon angsts, and the royal couple argues

Comments

[lodessa]

Oh Jon! I want to protect him from everything.

Also I love how Sansa is a mystery to Dany, since the two are like day and night to each other.

Which really highlights the similarities between Sansa and Jon actually.

[girlupnorth]

*nod nod*

Sansa vs Dany is a very important part of this story.

Sansa and Jon seem to me more different than they are similar, though they do have a lot in common.

[lodessa]

Sansa and Jon are very different, which is why I think it is sort of interesting to see that they do have so much in common. It's a perspective switch.

[novin_ha]

I like Jon's cluelessness and he's quite sweet here. I don't care for him too much, but you make him interesting, in a way.

Danaerys shines! I love her here. She's got a lot to learn, though... Her storming out actually almost made me laugh out loud. Emotions have to be controlled ;)

And the contrasts are nicely established. You win for writing this long a story and keeping it coherent!!!

[girlupnorth]

Fun thing is, at this point of writing Daenerys was shaped mostly as a counterpoint to both Sansa and Jon, and it wasn't until epilogue when I found what her motivations are.

You win for helping me out with this! :D

[miss_magrat]

Piszę, tej. Widzisz? Komentarz! (I nawet planuję do reszty też ;P)

Jon! Ładnie chwytasz jego pov, i to nawet bez większego angstu jak na razie ;>

Dany jest ciekawa, a nawet nie denerwuje zbytnio (mało szans do tej pory? Oj, wiesz, że nie żywię do niej zbyt ciepłych uczuc ;))

[girlupnorth]

Na początku to tam piękny angst imo jest ;)

A Daenerys będzie mało, ale mnie się dosyć podoba to, co będzie ;)

[girlupnorth]

W ogóle jaka piękna gwara poznańska, tej XD