Fic: High (3/5)

[girlpire]

Title: High
Author: girlpire
Rating: E for everyone?
Pairing: I'd probably call it gen, but there are lots of Spangel references.
Disclaimer: This story is based on the "Angel" series, with which I am not affiliated in any way. Joss Whedon is my master, etc.
Distribution: Please no. kthnxbye. :)
Summary: Post-NFA. What's left of Team Angel is

Comments

[adoxerella]

Charlotte's Evil Web *gigglesnort* That phase made me laugh out loud.

Oh dear, I think Spike's going to enjoy his job a bit too much.

I adore your Illyria. She's fantastic, and you've got her voice dead on.

Once again, a great chapter. Thanks for sharing this.

[girlpire]

thanks so much! i find illyria the hardest character to write. don't look too closely, or you'll notice that she tends to disappear in the middle of scenes. :)

would you believe i had spike, angel, AND jacob all saying the charlotte's evil web line at different times before i settled on gunn saying it? hehe. glad you enjoyed that little tidbit.

[lilithbint]

I love you, you know that don't you?
This is brilliant,
Spike's reactions are just perfect.

“Well, he wouldn’t bleed fast enough, would he?” asks Jacob. “His wounds would heal.”

“Depends how many there were,” Spike says.

I had a wonderful picture of Spike's face there.

[girlpire]

*feels loved* :D
i've always thought i understand spike pretty well, but i have the worst time writing his dialogue - i'm so self conscious about the accent.

[lilithbint]

I never write the accent cause it looks wrong and my writing professor would force me to eat the pages *grin*
when it is written well (as yours is) the reader can hear the accent fine.

[makd]

I am SO enjoying this.

I can hearthem all talking - and I can visualize them, too.

love this. [giggling.]

[girlpire]

yay! *dances with you*

[lynnenne]

“I have to kill him,” he says simply. “There’s obviously no other choice.”

*snort*

[girlpire]

spike just says things like that because he doesn't want to admit he's in lurrrrve with angel. :D

[samifidler]

**Through a mouthful of very sharp-looking teeth, Spike tells him cheerfully, "This is going to make my day

[girlpire]

i'm glad you see a little wesley in jacob. i sort of have early wes in mind when i'm writing him. i don't think angel's team could go very long without their very own wesley character - they need a wesley. :)