Drabble/Ficlet: Unbearable - Scorpius; Harry/Draco

[girlofavalon]

Title: Unbearable
Beta: mystressxoxo
Characters/Pairing: Scorpius, Harry/Draco
Rating: R
Warnings: voyerism
Word Count: 220
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by J.K. Rowling, various publishers, including but not limited to Bloomsbury Publishing Plc. and Scholastic Inc., and Warner Bros. Entertainment Inc. No money

Comments

[pink_mint]

Oh, wow, that was intense. Very twisted and very painful, and I just loved it. The last paragraph gutted me. :) Excellent!

[girlofavalon]

Yay, first comment. So bad I don't have cookies... :]

I am glad you liked it. Poor Scorpius...

[siniestramalfoy]

Wooh! it's pretty cool. And a bit heartbreaking :/ Girl, you're making me feel like start loving Harry/scorp instead of H/D xD

Really nice work :D

[girlofavalon]

Nooooo, don't say that! Harry/Scorpius is pretty hot, but H/D is my OTP. OMG! I've read a few foursomes of them plus Albus and Scorpius that were really good. You should try XD

[mystressxoxo]

Poor Scorpius! I can't help grinning, though, at the thought of both Malfoys lusting over Harry! The kinky part of my brain is screaming at Harry to love and take them both! *scolds brain for thinking such naughty thoughts and whistles innocently while visions of two blonds and a brunette dance in my head* LOL! xD

Now, this drabble could tie in with your 'A Few More Tries' one, huh? Almost like a prequel to it... *scolds brain again*

Poor Scorpius, though! How long has he been suffering over this? It must've been for some time if he knew when to run so he wouldn't hear those three words. He's got it bad... :C

*grinning again* Great job, love! =^;^=

[girlofavalon]

Hehe. Thank you, love! ^_^
Yeah, poor Scorpius has been suffering over this for quite a while... :C

Malfoys and Harry have such chemistry.

The kinky part of my brain is screaming at Harry to love and take them both!

LOL! Mine too. Btw, I have read a few H/D/S threesomes that are just HOOOOT, and a few foursomes with Albus too. XD Just great!!!

[bendleshnitz1]

Poor Scorpious. Loved it!

[girlofavalon]

I'm glad you liked, Thanks for reading!

[jtsbbsps_dk]

*weeps*

Damn, poor Scorpius! *snuggles him*
Awesome drabble of awesome that has killed me.
Stunning, sharp and soft all at the same time!

[girlofavalon]

Thank you!!! I am glad you liked it!
Yeah, poor Scorpius, but who knows... Maybe one day Harry can love both of them *grins*