Comments | girlofavalon: Drabble/Ficlet: Secret Gentleness

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Drabble/Ficlet: Secret Gentleness - Bellatrix/Narcissa

Oct 22, 2009 10:03

Title: Secret gentleness
Beta: the lovely brknhalo241
Pairing: Bellatrix/Narcissa
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Incest, slight underage (Narcissa is 17).
Word count: 842
Summary: She knows exactly how to take me to heaven.
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by J.K. Rowling, various publishers, including but not limited to ( Read more... )

fic - beta: brknhalo241, fic: hp - character: bellatrix, fic - length: drabble/ficlet, year: 2009, fic: hp - pairing: bellatrix/narcissa, fic: hp - group: black family, fic: hp - character: narcissa, fic - rating: nc17, fic - type: femslash, community: speedpr0nz

Comments 21

Secret gentleness joan_waterhouse October 24 2009, 20:46:05 UTC

A pretty damn hot piece of femslash! ;)

Re: Secret gentleness girlofavalon October 24 2009, 21:20:09 UTC

Thank you! :D

dirty_darella October 31 2009, 19:48:46 UTC

XD Hot!
Bellatrix was so well written in this! :D

girlofavalon October 31 2009, 20:18:41 UTC

Thank you!! I am glad you think so, it was cool to write her young version :P

brknhalo241 November 5 2009, 06:08:31 UTC

I've always disliked Bellatrix but I like the way you made her more human and showed her softer side even as she is seducing her sister. It's so wrong but she does it in a way that feels kind of right. She shares a side of herself with Narcissa that nobody else will ever see. It's touching but sad....

girlofavalon November 5 2009, 11:46:02 UTC

I've always liked and disliked Bella at the same time. Everything Bella does feels like the right thing, her moral boundaries are very loose. It's fun to work with.

I am glad you liked it!! Thank you so much for your pretty beta work! *hugs*

utteramusement January 6 2010, 03:32:40 UTC

Oh I love blackcest femmeslash! And you've done it so well here. I love Bella, she's so very much like I imagine a young Bellatrix and for me this I am not scared, and yet I am, I always am. defines the whole reason why I love Blackcest. LOVE THIS!

girlofavalon January 6 2010, 12:48:49 UTC

Why, thank you! Yeah, it was really refreshing to write a young Bellatrix that is more delicate than the adult version of her but that was not OOC... I mean, I can see the other Bella here as well: no moral bondaries, dominant...

I am glad you liked it!

dexstarr September 9 2010, 02:39:32 UTC

Oooh. Came to check out your journal because you added me as a friend, and found this! I looooove Bellatrix/Narcissa, and this is very yummy. I like the ending, the hint of tenderness Bella shows after she's had her conquest. Mmm.

girlofavalon October 27 2010, 13:27:41 UTC

I'm sorry for taking so long to reply. Feel free to check out my journal. I am so glad you enjoyed this piece!! <3