Comments | girlnamedclark: Cheaters (5/5)

girlnamedclark

Cheaters (5/5)

Aug 31, 2010 02:26

cheating

“I’ll be there in a second!” Rachel cried on her bedroom window, to Finn, who was just pulling over his car in front of her house.

Rachel paused in front of her mirror, inspecting herself. She ran her fingers through her hair. She licked her lips and then applied lipstick. She smoothed her clothes.

There. Now it wasn’t so obvious ( Read more... )

Comments 17

chewinggum20 August 31 2010, 11:57:19 UTC

I have really enjoyed these stories!! So glad Rachel picked Quinn and it was so sweet how she felt she was cheating on her!! It made my heart melt :-)

hope you start writin new stories soon

girlnamedclark August 31 2010, 12:22:25 UTC

oh thank you so much. I really was hoping not to disappoint anyone ;)
I've already posted my next multi-chapter story first chapter - One haunted night - if you wanted to check it out. it's not really the same tone as this it, but...

mjacton August 31 2010, 16:48:48 UTC

Really nice understated ending!

I really enjoyed this. Maybe a sequel is in order?

girlnamedclark August 31 2010, 18:01:02 UTC

hum... what about? xD

thanks for reading and always commenting

mjacton August 31 2010, 18:08:53 UTC

How they continue their relationship, making it official, discussing whether to make it public, how Finn reacts (maybe he finds out what they had before he and Rachel broke up), etc. Doesn't have to be all that, but those are a couple of ideas. You know, if you want to. It's up to you, obviously.

girlnamedclark August 31 2010, 19:15:00 UTC

now you planted a tiny idea in my brain xD
I may write a short one-shot about Rachel telling Finn/ Finn finding out.
thanks very much for the suggestions

slicki August 31 2010, 19:42:31 UTC

I loved this whole story! The ending was fantastic. I got this huge smile on my face when Rachel said the "cheating on you" line. It was perfect.

girlnamedclark August 31 2010, 20:12:32 UTC

thank you so much ;)

shesfiiine August 31 2010, 21:09:20 UTC

Nice choice picking Quinn... :-)

girlnamedclark August 31 2010, 21:49:20 UTC

I agree ;)

pee_wee_2005 September 1 2010, 00:33:32 UTC

Just read all five parts. Loved the concept. Very interesting.

I did feel a wee bit bad for Finn, though.

girlnamedclark September 1 2010, 00:41:14 UTC

thank you so much for taking the time ;)
yeah, I decided to make this not a "poor-Finn" fic. it was pretty tough on him, though