Cheaters (1/5)

Aug 18, 2010 13:42

Quinn stayed over her bed - messy sheets tangled bellow her fully dressed body - as she observed Rachel, standing in front of the mirror by the room’s door, brushing her dark hair with her fingers, composing her clothes, running her tongue over her full lips. They were pink and swollen, and Rachel applied Quinn’s red lipstick over them in an ( Read more... )

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mjacton August 18 2010, 15:29:11 UTC
Oh, I hope Rachel comes to her senses...and dumps Finn!

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girlnamedclark August 18 2010, 16:49:36 UTC
we'll see... xP

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samdittrich August 18 2010, 15:36:59 UTC
love this! thanks! =)

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girlnamedclark August 18 2010, 16:49:20 UTC
no need to thank ;)

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shesfiiine August 18 2010, 17:43:53 UTC
Wow didn't think Rachel could be that blind to her own feelings...

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morte206 August 18 2010, 20:25:51 UTC
The last paragraph packed quite the wallop, particularly the last line. Having been all three I think I can honestly say that I think Q has it hardest of all.

Looking forward to the rest of this.

Thank you for sharing.

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girlnamedclark August 18 2010, 20:36:06 UTC
thank you for reading and taking the time to reply ;)

I always enjoy feedback, but I particulary like when people tell me what they liked, or what the parts they thought were interesting or that they could relate to... thank you for that

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therealval August 18 2010, 21:02:26 UTC
Rachel as a cheater.. Hmm. Have me hooked!

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