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[girlinachronism]

    From the outside, Fairuze looked just like the other nightclubs on the riverfront. It was tall, narrow, and constructed of dark red brick that looked almost black in the moonlight. A glowing neon sign with ornate, Persian-looking lettering cast a sultry cerulean shadow over the doorway as well as over the two bouncers that framed either side.

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[anonymous]

i will give you a big thorough comment tomorrow...i have to read for class too...BUT just know that there's a couple of word choices that i would change...adjectives here and there that take away from the atmosphere. So far so good though...like i said more details later.