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sanshal April 25 2015, 14:03:22 UTC
I usually steer clear of destiel- not my cuppa *shrug*; but you've somehow managed to reel me in with this. Cas' reaction was so cute!

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girlgotagun April 25 2015, 18:31:51 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! :D I figure it's pretty high praise when someone will press on reading through a ship they don't like. *hugs*

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ohwillothewisp April 28 2015, 23:23:49 UTC
OMG this is such a good start! I love it so far! I really like the way you wrote Dean, that this all started with him trying to a help a little girl, and it just sort of evolved from there. He comes across as a kidnapper, but not an all around bad guy. I like his thoughts/justification behind what he does. And it's really fun to see Charlie, I love her character and she fits in so well with this!

Then the scene with poor Cas realizing he is being kidnapped...so perfect. I loved his reaction. He knows better than to get into a car with a stranger, but he is desperate enough to do it anyway. And then Dean is the one offended by Cas' words, that part was very fun to read! This is a really great and I cannot wait to read the rest!

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girlgotagun April 29 2015, 00:45:23 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad you're liking it! I hope the rest is just as good. <3

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