nothing here resets the clocks (snape/lupin)

[girl_tarte]

berry’s birthday snupin!
words: 6000ish
rating: R
warning: 1st person pov. also crammed to the gills with sirius black and possibly a bit on the grim side.

note 1: beta’d by lovely fitofpique. <3
note 2: last year i wrote buckle_berry the sweetest fluffiest creamcake of a snupin for her birthday, and for mine she wrote a brutal series of violent snupin sex vignettes.

Comments

[valis2]

Absolutely fantastic. Absolutely amazing. Have recc'ed it here.

WOW.

[girl_tarte]

wow yourself.

thank you so much for this rec. i am having to apply cold flannels to get the blush down. i'm really flattered and so pleased you got so much out of it.

[pippinmctaggart]

Oh, Tarte of my heart, I love this and you so much. Your Snape is always just right, bitter and jealous and childish and nasty and yet desperate to have someone for himself, someone to stay and to clutch, you know?

A shoulder white and thin enough to have gone its whole life without affection, he swears against it like a kiss. God, that's gorgeous and perfect and fills me with spiky, spiny, salty pleasure.

[girl_tarte]

someone to stay and to clutch

yes! exactly that. pip, i love him more for all his terribleness than i love all the other characters put together (possible excep. of harryface). i think i get a bit carried away when i write him, but if it worked for you then i am pleased! thank you, honey.

[navelremark]

I feel like this Snape a lot.

I don't know how to compliment your writing, other than to say it is always excellent the whole way through.

[girl_tarte]

me too. :| (perhaps a little anger management is indicated)

thank you, hon. you are v. kind. *blush*

[lore]

This was quite visceral. I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you very much!

love, lore

[girl_tarte]

you're so welcome. thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it. :)

[dizilla]

Finally had a chance to read this and I must say how much I love it! I love that it's all in Severus' POV, it's moody and a bit gloomy and just feels like him. I also loved Sirius in this and how Remus handles him. A fantasmic read. ^_^

[girl_tarte]

thank you so much. i'm flattered you liked this. i have quite strong feelings about snape characterization, so i'm really pleased you thought the mood fitted him. :)