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girl!Doctor Episode

Jul 03, 2008 07:24

Title: Night of the Robots
Pairing: girl!Doctor on her own
Rating: 12 / PG-13
Summary: The Doctor crashlands on a dead planet where a rag-tag human outpost has lost all of its robots.
Spoilers: Very mild spoilers for 'Forest of the Dead', and a ref to 'Embrace the Darkness', an Eighth Doctor audio.
Notes: Having twisted my ankle at the beginning of ( Read more... )

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Comments 6

sailorptah July 3 2008, 13:24:30 UTC

"Oh he's very dead. If I were him, I'd be so dead I wouldn't even be able to regenerate. Not if I was that dead. Oh no."

XD

"Good lad. Now look at me, that's it. Straight at me. Look at my chest. Isn't it nice? Take a good long look. Don't take your eyes off me."

Ever seen Little Britain? "Look into my eyes, look into my eyes, don't look around the eyes, look into my eyes, boom! you're under . . ."

"But I tried to kill you."

"Everybody does."

It's brilliant because it's true.

"Must..." the Doctor gasped as they ran, "invest... in-a... sports-bra!"

Oh, girl!Doctor.

Cool story!

darkestmoorhen July 3 2008, 18:07:37 UTC

Haha Doctor Who meets Little Britain. Though it would have to be the Master. Maybe that Guy in Little Britain IS the Master. He was posing as a human at the time after all...

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the comment.

tau_sigma July 3 2008, 16:26:50 UTC

Very nice! Amazing, in fact; I can just see this being filmed for TV, it's perfectly in the style of an episode.

Might be an idea to get a beta reader though, there are occasional typos and grammatical errors that detract a bit from the story.

Still, really loved it. 'Must invest in a sports bra!' - Hee! :)

darkestmoorhen July 3 2008, 18:13:27 UTC

Oh, I do like you name. Does that mean you went to school with a certain Theta Sigma, or are you perhaps one of his forty-four cousins?

And it's true that I need a good Beta. I write fast and carelessly and am generally rubbish at typing. But good Betas are so hard to find. And when you do find one they're never around when you need them.

But yes, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I loved writing for girl!Doctor and may do so again sometime.

mzsugarrat July 13 2008, 22:29:30 UTC

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant!
It's because fic likes this I want a girl doctor^-^
Written like this she would be fantastic!

darkestmoorhen July 14 2008, 06:22:56 UTC

Why thank you. I based her largely of the Forth Doctor, with maybe a bit of Two and Five thrown in. I thought she came off rather well. SHe was certainly fun to write.