Three's a crowd, chapter 10

[girl_called_sun]

I have dug this out, dusted it off, and with only mild threats of physical violence, I have forced it to a conclusion.

To recap - back from the Scanran War, Kel is kicking her heels in Tortall, and through a series of misunderstandings she believes Lerant has feelings for Dom, and in her Kel manner, decides she will smooth the path of true love.

Comments

[peroxidepirate]

*flails*

This is adorable, and I'm so happy for them! :)

ETA: But, wait, did you say "conclusion?" Does that mean this is the very end, or do we get Kel's reaction yet? *hopeful*

[girl_called_sun]

Glad you like!

I should write a conclusion, but I really don't think I will. Maybe. I should....

[anait]

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyy!!!

Okay, I had to get that out of my system. What a surprise and a delight to look at my friends page tonight and find fic from you!

for tactical match-making porpoises. Purposes.”
I laughed out loud right here. Cheesy, but you made me smile. :)

Dom looked at Lerant, sitting quite still, half silvered and half shadowed in the moonlight.
This whole paragraph is really great. Love all the sensory description and emotion, how immediate and intimate it is.

Not blue like sapphires, or the sea, or the sky, or any unoriginal nonsense like that. Blue like the eyes of a man who might love you.
<3<3<3 You're poking at canon (!), but it suits Lerant perfectly as well as being a lovely sentiment it its own right.

[girl_called_sun]

Yay for comments on antiquated fic, too!

You're poking at canon (!) Yes, I am, and I've very pleased you noticed. Couldn't resist ;)

I am also all about the cheesy puns.

[osprey_archer]

Cheers! I had all but given up hope for this fic ever reappearing!

And aw, Dom. So awkward! But he has so much guts! And yay Lerant for having the guts to meet him halfway! And the suffering of hope before Lerant does in fact admit that he's totally into Dom too...

Also, take advantage of the situation for tactical match-making porpoises. Purposes.”>/i> made me giggle. I can just see winged Cupid-porpoises making tactical matches...

[girl_called_sun]

So glad you still read this chapter after sooooo long....

Flying porpoises! Could happen in Tortall....

Love awkward Dom, and Lerant managing not to be rubbish when it really matters