Comments | girl4edwards04: SNIPPET: "Immunity"

girl4edwards04

SNIPPET: "Immunity"

Jul 05, 2010 15:54

This is a snippet from the 24 fanfic I'm currently working on for the 2x5obsessions challenge, for the "reversed roles" prompt. I'm posting the first part because I'm not entirely sure how I feel about it, to be honest. I've drafted three different ways for this story to begin, started it over about four times, and here I am now, still unsure about it ( Read more... )

halp, writing, 24

Comments 9

zed_pm July 5 2010, 20:35:47 UTC

Independence Day was on yesterday. I thought of you. ROFL

girl4edwards04 July 5 2010, 20:46:37 UTC

LMFAO. I SO SAW IT ON TV AND I LOL'D. :D :D :D

I was like, "THIS IS THE ONLY LOGICAL MOVIE TO WATCH TODAY." The only part I didn't dig about AMC or whatever's made-for-TV version is that they CENSORED the part where President Whitmore says "Let's nuke the bastards," which pretty much makes that scene as epic as it is. They just made him say, "NUKE 'EM," look intense for a second, and walk away. XDDD I WAS LIKE, WHAT.

zed_pm July 6 2010, 00:29:09 UTC

HAHAHA THEY CENSORED HIM??? HOW DARE THEY!!!! D:
But yeah it was totally logical for the holiday. WHAT ELSE WOULD ONE WATCH?? ;) Well maybe I watched Star Wars, but still....LULZ

girl4edwards04 July 6 2010, 21:26:42 UTC

THEY DID. I WAS WICKED MAD. I WAS LIKE "WHAT, YOU CAN'T SAY 'BASTARD' ON TV??!?! HAVE YOU NEVER WATCHED '24?!?!!'" XD

Logic, Jim. It makes the world go round, or whatever those pointy-eared [censored] say. <--SEE, THAT'S NO FUN. XD

Haha, wasn't there like, a Star Wars marathon on Spike on the 4th? :P

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atoasterstrudel July 6 2010, 11:08:06 UTC

WAIT. IS ASSAD SLEEPING WITH BILL PULLMAN?! What is going on. :D

girl4edwards04 July 6 2010, 21:28:36 UTC

I WAS WONDERING IF SOMEONE WAS GOING TO GRAB THAT FROM CONTEXT. XD

Heh, heh.

MAAAAAAYBE? ;D

Late rekindle956 July 8 2010, 01:00:37 UTC

It could be so EPIC! But maybe that's the thing, maybe that's why it gives you trouble. Being greedy, I say keep going, but only if you are enjoying it as well. You could keep it short, just the fact that you are still writing Assad keeps my happy. :)

Re: Late girl4edwards04 July 8 2010, 01:24:45 UTC

YOU. :D *tackles*

Oh, I'm having a blast. XD Just a few minor technical details to work out, as it were. I think it's the epicness that keeps derailing me. Every time I type the words "Special Agent Assad," I stop for a few minutes like ":D :D :D HA THAT'S AWESOME." I don't even know, man. LOL.

I can't NOT write Assad. :)