[Fanfiction] Olives and Detergent and... Cat... PART TWO

[tamerlorika]

Title: Olives and Detergent and... Cat...
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[genaminna]

Oh, dear. Poor Japan, lol.
Ah, it's okay! Take your time, dear~
Lovely fic so far!~

"Well... spending more time in his house - I mean, sending more diplomats to spend time in his - the - country... seems beneficial, don't you think?"

*TOTALLY* LOL'ed at this, ahahaha!!
<3 ^.^
(And of course the loud person would be an American, huh? xDDD)
Thank you for continuing this! <3 C:

[tamerlorika]

XD My pleasure. You gave such good prompts, I wanted to do them all!!!

[disownmereturns]

Yikes, the press just screws everything up, don't they?

Compelling! :)

[tamerlorika]

Thank you very much for taking the time to review! =D it made me happy

[mochalatt3]

Aww, poor kiku. He's so cute but also so dense lol. Can't wait for the next part :)

[tamerlorika]

He IS rather dense *sigh* maybe he should stop reading shoujo manga *looks around furtively as she realizes she has just described herself*

[infiniteowl]

It's perfectly fine to post the following parts here, don't worry! In fact, go ahead and post this fic to other appropriate communities, if you like. :)

I did notice a number of typos (like "hte" instead of "the" in places; maybe a spell-check would help?), but the plot is still very solid and the Hungary-like interviewer made me LOL. Now if only Japan would realize that he doesn't need to "pretend" that Greece loves him back...but that's going to be resolved in the later parts, right?

[tamerlorika]

Alright, thanks for the information! Thanks also for pointing out the typos - you're right, I did forget to spellcheck ^^;;

Ah, yes, it will all turn out okay (cuz I can't deal with these two being unhappy). Thanks so much for taking the time to give me feedback.