Comments | gioiarock: Have You Ever Seen the Rain? [Drabble, Open Pairing]

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Have You Ever Seen the Rain? [Drabble, Open Pairing]

Feb 05, 2011 02:50

Title: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Author: gioiadivisione
Rating: G, Mentions of Addiction.
Pairing: Open
Band: Open
Disclaimer: None, no names mentioned. Baha, I own it all.
Summary: "Yesterday and days before, sun is cold and rain is hard, I know, been that way for all my time."
Comment: Summary and Title from Credence Clearwater Revival's Have You Ever Seen the ( Read more... )

r: g, c: drabble, p: open

Comments 5

fadinglimit February 5 2011, 08:02:19 UTC

I'm too lazy to log out orz

Anyways. You were right about the metaphors XD~ but I don't think you abused them. They're used beautifully here, and I really like this. ♥

gioiadivisione February 5 2011, 08:16:55 UTC

Thank you <3

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gioiadivisione February 5 2011, 20:19:36 UTC

I'm glad you like it :3

inner_demons_ February 8 2011, 02:36:10 UTC

Om: The first to admit that neither of us could control the weather...

Favourite line. I have a particular love for everything related to weather so this fic was beautiful to read. Loved the metaphors, and still ended up putting pairings even where there were none.

gioiadivisione February 8 2011, 04:25:31 UTC

Was rereading my comment earlier and realized that LJ ate half of it >< deleting and starting over!

Thank you so much <3 Yeah I had a few pairings in my head when I wrote it. Reita/Ruki (who I never pair together), Hiroto/Tatsurou. I'm love the weather, when I'm down I like to go sit in the rain til I feel better.