Back with another one-- yeah, I just got inspired after days of studying the same thing. ^^ ( And look, I can still put up a happy face. xD )
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Math - The Harbinger of Insanity
People say that it starts with a dot,
I say-- it were just some poor sheep.
Counting them till midnight,
lulled me to sweet sleep.
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Lol, somehow I just found that too humourous-- given my condition right now. And how your statement fits that as well! xD
Ooh, two more math tests to go, huh? All the best!! ^_^ For the others, too, haha. Though math is by far the most difficult thing for me. >_<
I still have to study for three more months for the so-craved for freedom. Well, hope we both do our best!~
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But I don't like the last paragraph... it was a bit predictable and well, after all that you wrote up, it couldn't be the proper contrast ;)
Besides that, the whole poem is good, rather straightforward. xD
~MannC
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The last paragraph... yeah, I really do need to do somethin' about it-- the message conveyed is totally what I wanted-- but I could use some more sophisticated vocabulary, lol. I mean, I could make it have some more striking impact.
It's the love for basic math!~ <3
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Oooh I can't wait! Awesome, you managed to finish it in time. ^^ 9 am... would be 14.30 here... okay! :)
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