Another poem - on maths this time xD

Mar 12, 2008 13:18

Back with another one-- yeah, I just got inspired after days of studying the same thing. ^^ ( And look, I can still put up a happy face. xD )

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Math - The Harbinger of Insanity

People say that it starts with a dot,
I say-- it were just some poor sheep.
Counting them till midnight,
lulled me to sweet sleep.

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meicdon13 March 12 2008, 11:08:37 UTC
This is strangely fitting XD I have two more math tests before the end of the year plus loads more of other things. Then, FREEDOM \o/

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ginryuu_souhi March 12 2008, 14:31:55 UTC
This is strangely fitting XD

Lol, somehow I just found that too humourous-- given my condition right now. And how your statement fits that as well! xD

Ooh, two more math tests to go, huh? All the best!! ^_^ For the others, too, haha. Though math is by far the most difficult thing for me. >_<

I still have to study for three more months for the so-craved for freedom. Well, hope we both do our best!~

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meicdon13 March 12 2008, 15:11:39 UTC
We can do this! *fighting spirit*

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anonymous March 12 2008, 13:18:31 UTC
Do you, ever, EVER write anything w/o the BIG words? :P
But I don't like the last paragraph... it was a bit predictable and well, after all that you wrote up, it couldn't be the proper contrast ;)
Besides that, the whole poem is good, rather straightforward. xD

~MannC

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ginryuu_souhi March 12 2008, 14:35:19 UTC
The 'BIG' words, eh? Somehow, except the jargon part, I still didn't find any. xD
The last paragraph... yeah, I really do need to do somethin' about it-- the message conveyed is totally what I wanted-- but I could use some more sophisticated vocabulary, lol. I mean, I could make it have some more striking impact.
It's the love for basic math!~ <3

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ginryuu_souhi March 12 2008, 14:39:05 UTC
Haha, I can totally understand that! And that line... um, it was kind of a joke among my friends-- whenever we used to solve out problems related to proving stuff. xD

Oooh I can't wait! Awesome, you managed to finish it in time. ^^ 9 am... would be 14.30 here... okay! :)

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well done anonymous April 5 2008, 22:15:33 UTC
favorited this one, guy

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Re: well done ginryuu_souhi April 6 2008, 12:33:58 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it~ ( though commenting as anonymous doesn't help me try place you at all. ;_; )

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