Fic: In a Mirror, Darkly; Thor/Loki, top!Loki

[ginger_maya]

Title: In a Mirror, Darkly
Author: ginger_maya
Rating: ADULT
Warnings: dubcon
Disclaimer: I do not own Thor and I make no money out of writing this.
A/N: So I finally decided to jump on the "Loki's king and he has made Thor his pet. Forceful oral sex in the throne room ensues." bandwagon.

Comments

[dmnutv_archer]

Oh. This hurt. A lot. Your wonderful writing carried me along, squirming and not wanting to read further, but needing more. If that makes sense?

A few quick thoughts: Your descriptions are really well done. Loved the raven reference. Ending it with Loki reverting to his true form was an excellent decision.

I'm unusual in that I like Loki topping, even in consensual situations. I also LOVE him as a power bottom. And a true bottom. Ok, so I love him any which way. Seems fitting for him to be sexually fluid, given who he is.

For Thor, being submissive is not natural (to me). So here, the way he is being utterly humiliated both sexually and in every other way, makes it that much worse. Very difficult to read, because you did it so well. I hope you will be writing more of them!

[ginger_maya]

It makes perfect sense.

I love Loki in every possible way too, though I admit that my most beloved kink was super submissive (often intersex *cough*) Loki. It took me a while to get used to the idea of Loki topping (and so hard at that) but then I decided it was very, very hot.

I do have, however, a kink for big, manly men bottoming, and doing so willingly and eagerly (not that it happened like that with Thor here), so it was much easier to write sub!Thor than it was to write top!Loki.

Thank you so much for your wonderful review! :D

[devitahanet]

I liked the ending- will we be seeing more True Blue Loki in future installments?

[ginger_maya]

That depends on my muses, which may or may not manifest, I cannot promise anything. I do love Jotun!Loki though, I can guarantee that. :D

[galadhil]

It's so sad... from the very beginning. I don't even like top!loki... Yet I couldn't stop reading! Your style is perfect, and it was a pleasure to read it :)

[ginger_maya]

Thank you so much!

[black_nata]

this was absolutely brilliant. i'll get back to you with proper feedback when i pick my jaw off the floor.

[ginger_maya]

XDXD Thank you so much, I am glad the story had the desired effect! :D

OUCH.

[sirbojangles]

Top!Loki is unexpectedly hot, tho.

BTW, will the rest of Brittle ever see the light of day? It is just such a great read that I can't help but want more. Pretty please with whipped cream on top?